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This is interesting. Rather tough on Willl. Proud ofhim though---had no trouble plugging dear old dad did he? course he knew dad was dead. If when he was alsive--did he torture Jack on the ship? How come there are no legends about that? and if there were, wouldn't the live crew have heard them? The metal frame. I assume the spin was like a top, not like a pin wheel, cause he seemed to stay upside down. He is in between both worlds because he is wearing the silver sparrow, right? its a shame he feels old, serve him right for lying to will about his birthday. Lot of brithday kisses there, apparently dear william , when it comes to sex, is like a goat. The part about using the silver cat twice--sounds similar to the short story "Monkey's paw". Now, does Jack like being tortured by bill? appparently he did once. Is it that he doesn't like it any more? or he doesn't want it any more? because he kept telling bill that yes, he did want him to use all the toys on him. The "sundance" ceremony is interesting---i wonder if you are going to get any negative reaction from native americans? If bill is in a religious mod, there is alway the bris (circumcision), that oought to really please Jack. How about cruxifiction? although there is a fic on ffnet called untitled, where Norry gets tired of having him escape from the gallows so he cruxifiy him (legal until 1800) and he cant escape if he is nailed to a beam. Dies in one day though, and usually it was a two or three day ride. How is Jack going to explain to the regular crew how he ise toe to hang upside down in mid air. and how is he going to keep them out of his cabin because that is not something one sees everyday. What will Jack do if Will decides to continue a fine old family tradition? besides scream that is. and while he was scrreaming, why did none of the crew come in to save him. Jerks. What about the silver filigree anal ball that you put a live mouse in--chinese, I'v heard it called a bhinn wah ball---but I don't know if that is correct, nor how to spell it. there is also a tube with a trap door at the end. stuff the poor mouse in it, shove the tube in the ass, and open the trapdoor, withdraw the tube, leaving a very surprised mouse, which wiggles around, probably biting, and if it is lucky, it turns around and squeezes its way out. I would think that methane fumes would kill it pretty quickly if not. Does Jack like the torture because he gets off on it? or does he like it because he interprets the pain as pleasure? Me want to know. Also want to know what happens next.

Hellborne?
Are you still with us? Long time no read, mate.
You didn't gamble away your computer, did you? Or are you still busy whipping that inspiration demon of yours?
Suggestion: Take the thumbscrews off! They can be obstructive in writing.
Now, please, give us an update! It's cruel to let Jack wait so long for his 'paying session'.

this is a very goos story i hope you finish it and i can't wait until you get the next part up. IF you don't mind let me know when you get the next one up.thanks a lot


Peace

This is so so good.This is both my first read of a POTC fic and also My first read of a sex torture flick. I have definetly and fortuitously stumbled into the right place. This is such fun. You have Jack so perfect in the role. More more more!

This is great please update soon pretty please I love all the pain and torment Jack is going through but I also love the sweet sences of Jack and Will so please update soon I can hardly contain my excitement. P.S. ingenuis plot idea one of the best that I have read.

Slapping hellborne gets me excellent fanfiction. That's interesting.
I wonder what a right good flogging could get out of you.

Normally i love your stories but this one is extremely confusing i don't understand a thing of it

Okay, so I'm really into BDSM but Bill scares me. *He actaully sounds like my top, who has gone crazy I swear* (I didn't just say that)

Please write more...and don't let Jack get hurt...*tells Bill to be nice then runs away a quickly as possible* *eep*

Where is the update, you mangy bilgerat? *slap* People are waiting here. *slap* Get on with it! NOW!

I can see torture ahead and not just sexual! From the way you worded some things I see Will using the statue or necklace twice without knowing it can harm you. Hmmm...that would be pretty awesome...he could almost die...^_^