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for The Valentine

by hellborne

person Jessy
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't let the plot bunnies die; it would be a crime. Even though I'm not a Jack/Norrington fan, I found this story quite amusing. I think you are very good at capturing Jack's charater. (Of course, wouldn't we all like to capture Jack...) Happy writing!
person Susan
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was just lovely. I love to see an unusual ending, and this one sure was! But most of all, it makes for a very contented kind of happiness -- the best kind.
person theblackraveness
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::falls over laughing:: I love your little end comments there. Just to let you know, I LOVE your story. I enjoy the added humor everytime Jack thought he had it all figured out. ::feeds the plot bunnies and gives Hellborne a giant cookie:: Kudos! I can't wait to read more of your work!
person Kei
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful tale with such a wickedly delicious twist at the end -and yet, who else could Jack's admirer have been? I enjoyed it!

-Kei
person Kat
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, well written and highly amusing! I had my suspicions but you played them off well. Thanks for a good read and a good laugh!
person driretlan
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
jod job i think you should have a sequal to see what happens when he returns to port. it will make great mansmut ^_^. keep up the the good stories im sure you have seen me other reviews..lol.

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