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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a GREAT read!
I could really identify with your OC, and for some reason it didn’t end when we found out the maid was a block… *snicker*
Anyway, very original story line and a great writing stile! There’s still a grammar kink here and there, but if one’ reading a good story like this, why would one care?
I saw that you haven’t written anything else, yet, so I hope the new movie coming out this spring will give you new inspiration, since it’ll have more Hector in it (I promise) and somehow you story reminded me a lot of what we’ll have coming from him this time round! ;)
PS: Feel free to keep me posted, should you up-date your stories here on aaf.net or if you have an account with more stories somewhere hidden away ;)
I could really identify with your OC, and for some reason it didn’t end when we found out the maid was a block… *snicker*
Anyway, very original story line and a great writing stile! There’s still a grammar kink here and there, but if one’ reading a good story like this, why would one care?
I saw that you haven’t written anything else, yet, so I hope the new movie coming out this spring will give you new inspiration, since it’ll have more Hector in it (I promise) and somehow you story reminded me a lot of what we’ll have coming from him this time round! ;)
PS: Feel free to keep me posted, should you up-date your stories here on aaf.net or if you have an account with more stories somewhere hidden away ;)
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to read something so very original. I can tell that a lot of work went into this story.