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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wicked fiction tonight..I'm on a roll
yay!
Wicked set...
yay!
Wicked set...
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. You should continue it.
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read it again and loved it every bit as much as the first two times. Beg, Beg, Beg, Beg - updates please.
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo...Wow you reallly need to update this baby! How can you leave your loyal readers hanging like this? *pouts* pretty please?
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is great! Well writen and thought out. With for once, a sensical and enjoyable plot. Not to mention some very steamy scenes. And for the record, i think you have Smith about as spot on as he could be in suchituaituation! Please update soon.
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...
I'm re-reading your story for second time by now. It's one of my favourites, really. You're making me all warm inside. I guess it's the way you describe Smith so well, so realistic, so passionate.
Funny point about that annoying blone. I'm a brunette - and I know all too well those irritating blondes, who have such high thoughts of themselves :(
I'd love to read more from you. No hurry - take your time. Some times it's a good idea to take a break from Smith stories. Because when you'll come back to writing, you'll have all this renewed energy and inspiration. That's how I write 'Tango'.
Love,
Selina
I'm re-reading your story for second time by now. It's one of my favourites, really. You're making me all warm inside. I guess it's the way you describe Smith so well, so realistic, so passionate.
Funny point about that annoying blone. I'm a brunette - and I know all too well those irritating blondes, who have such high thoughts of themselves :(
I'd love to read more from you. No hurry - take your time. Some times it's a good idea to take a break from Smith stories. Because when you'll come back to writing, you'll have all this renewed energy and inspiration. That's how I write 'Tango'.
Love,
Selina
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How cay you stop now? Start to writing. Now. It's inevitable.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. my. God. I love this. Please, please, please write more. mplymply adore this story, it is the sexiest, most seductive Smith tale I've ever read.
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now THAT is a good fanfiction!!! I really like your story steel kitten for sooooo many reasons which I wanna tell yoout:out:
You gotta be the girl who certainly has changed the way I look at smith! After reading your fanfiction I went back and watched the matrix and the matrix reloaded with more of an interest in smith. Whether this is a good or bad thing I dunno ;) But the summary about agent smith acting a little OOC-well sure we ain’t seen him come onto a woman, but if he DID-I think he would act very much like you described him in your fic. I have read a few other fics around about him and he seems out of character in those fics. I think you’ve got his character within the the boundaries of who he is. I like your sinister, sly, sternly smith who has an air of professionalism about him and is acting like an agent even when hes doing…”naughty” things to a woman ;) he’s a believable seductive smith!
Secondly, I like your original character-Miranda singer. I’ve never warmed to original characters in fanfiction but I like your character:
“The young woman was strong in build; well muscled from years of combat training, yet there was an air about her, a sense of childlike wonder that kept her face young; her eyes wider than most twentysomethings.” “Shaking her brunette head, she donher her reading glasses…”
I like that-the fact she is not the stereotypical “dumb blonde” you usually find in fanfics of this nature.
What can I say…I love brunettes! I like the chemistry between them even though she seems to be much younger than him if that’s right-I mean he’s an agent programme-do they age?
I like agent smith teasing Miranda like that in chapter 2 ;) and I liked the resistance that turned to good ol’ plain lust in chapter 1. I hope I’ll see more of that in your upcoming chapters? and I dunno how or if you plan to develop smith’s character further, but it wont matter cause I’m really liking him the way he is!
I hopw you don’t mind a bit of constructive critism-even though your fanfic is good I just wanto pto point some things out?
I thought it was strange that smith addressed agent brown as “mister brown”. I just thought that sounded strange-I kinda thought he would call him “agent brown” or just “brown”.
And that’s it really.
I hope my review has encouraged you to write that 4th chapter QUICK cause I need to know what happens!!! I look forward to reading it :)
You gotta be the girl who certainly has changed the way I look at smith! After reading your fanfiction I went back and watched the matrix and the matrix reloaded with more of an interest in smith. Whether this is a good or bad thing I dunno ;) But the summary about agent smith acting a little OOC-well sure we ain’t seen him come onto a woman, but if he DID-I think he would act very much like you described him in your fic. I have read a few other fics around about him and he seems out of character in those fics. I think you’ve got his character within the the boundaries of who he is. I like your sinister, sly, sternly smith who has an air of professionalism about him and is acting like an agent even when hes doing…”naughty” things to a woman ;) he’s a believable seductive smith!
Secondly, I like your original character-Miranda singer. I’ve never warmed to original characters in fanfiction but I like your character:
“The young woman was strong in build; well muscled from years of combat training, yet there was an air about her, a sense of childlike wonder that kept her face young; her eyes wider than most twentysomethings.” “Shaking her brunette head, she donher her reading glasses…”
I like that-the fact she is not the stereotypical “dumb blonde” you usually find in fanfics of this nature.
What can I say…I love brunettes! I like the chemistry between them even though she seems to be much younger than him if that’s right-I mean he’s an agent programme-do they age?
I like agent smith teasing Miranda like that in chapter 2 ;) and I liked the resistance that turned to good ol’ plain lust in chapter 1. I hope I’ll see more of that in your upcoming chapters? and I dunno how or if you plan to develop smith’s character further, but it wont matter cause I’m really liking him the way he is!
I hopw you don’t mind a bit of constructive critism-even though your fanfic is good I just wanto pto point some things out?
I thought it was strange that smith addressed agent brown as “mister brown”. I just thought that sounded strange-I kinda thought he would call him “agent brown” or just “brown”.
And that’s it really.
I hope my review has encouraged you to write that 4th chapter QUICK cause I need to know what happens!!! I look forward to reading it :)