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person Raven
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nothing personal but i didn't like it, not because i didn't like the writing.
I think you write fantastic, i just simply can't read about the men i love getting raped :(
other than that, you write really good.

I don't understand why there are so many fics about pirates raping males, why is male rape arousing and females is just horrible?
it always confused me.

Take care
~Raven
person Diana
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this! Write more ASAP!!
person VampireJesse
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, this was simply hilarious. Not that you meant it to be but I was just cracking every second phrase. Very good, *rofl*
person Lydia NightShade
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!

Creepy! I loved it! Especially the line about the therapy, being a psych major I could appreciate that. Quite an enjoyable little story, and rather unique I might add. ^_^

~lydia~
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.... *speechless*

You will continue this, right?
person Chaos Witch
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story !
Wow, imagining Johnny and Jack together gives *me* wet dreams... *gg*
The use of french sentences is a good idea, but there is a little mistake. Vanessa says: "Ne vous inquiétez pas." In French, you use the "vous"-form for people you are not liarliar with (it's the same as if she'd call him "Mister Depp".) The right form would be "Ne t'inquiéte pas."
Luv,
~ Chaos Witch~
person Mercurial
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“Go fuck yourself.”

“No, love. I believe I’ll leave that to you.”
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*literally and figuratively, dies. Expires. Flails about in chair, thrashing limbs wildly in every direction out of sheer and unadulterated excitement*

There is nothing whatsoever to mitigate this - that was absolutely awesome!!!

Please, please update. Pretty please. With cherries. With leather straps. With whipped cream and stockings?

Please! *flutters eyelashes at you with as closely contrived to be sultry eyes*

~ Jenna.
person ButterBalls
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shakes your hand vigorously* Thank you! I loved it! I was very intrigued at the idea of Jack and Johnny together and...*drools* Very nice, very hot, and Jack was very in character. It'd be nice to see a sequebut but I know it's kind of hard to write them for PWP.

*wanders off, whistling*
person Cait
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
....................................................wow
*shocked*
*stunned*
UPDATE QUICKLY! LMAO
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is the best slash ever!!!!! the 2 hottest men on the planet...jonny depp and captain jack sparrow!!! wow i would love you to write a sequal...plez *puppy dog eyes* pretty pretty plez.

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