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person Diana
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story has got to be the best POTC fic I've ever read. It's amazing! I really loved how Jack and Johnny had everyone confused abut who was who. That was a cute idea. And it was very original. I've never read another fic with something like that in it... I love it! And as for the Johnny/Jack/Will orgy goin' on... THAT WAS HOT! Definetely include more of Will. Johnny and Jack can use some more Will-ness. ^_^ This fic is amazing. Update real soon okay? I'll be checking back for chapter 5 everyday! =)
person Tilly
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Plz write summore!!
person Anni
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I vote for 'Jack comes to the present.'
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was definitely worth the wait :). I really love this story and can’tt tot to read another chapter so you have to continue writing it. I am curious to see what will happen when Johnny next meets up with Orlando as well as what would happen if jack gets stuck in the present maybe he might have a little fling with Vanessa. Anyway its your story so do whatever you lwithwith it only please continue it and try and up date as soon as possible :)
person littlebird
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
>This time I need people to tell me which they prefer…Jack coming to NOW or Johnny going BACK.
I personally prefer Jack showing up in the present. "This bed is possessed" - that was just so cute.
A little criticism: Why did Jack not go back to kill that man who had held him as a slave or at least rob him of Jack's&Johnny's hard-earned money?
person spankmonkeyjack
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm, very nice! It's so easy to get all hot & bothered about one Capt. Jack, but TWO!!!!!!! omg - so much better!
& including Will was very sweet, I thought it added balance. I
've always found it interesting the way that Johnny talks about his characters, & this is a fascinating (& very arousing!) exploration of that.
person Frankenmuth
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*eeeeeee* I loved it! It was wonderful! (and long, very good, very very good)

I really wouldn't know where you would go with it if you went on, but I would be so happy if you did.

schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:( When are you going to update this story. I read it ages ago and have been checking every single day to see if there was another chapter. This is one of the most original pirate stories yet and i can't wait to read all about johnny and jack again. The idea of having both of them together is just brillient. i really can't praise this story enough.
person MissHighSchool
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! The idightight be a bit weird, but being a weird girl, I absolutely don't mind!! By the way, the French's perfect (I'm a Belgian girl and French's my second language), must be a good site you have there. I dunno if you'll continue the story, and if you do, I can't wait for the next chappie!! Kisses, MissHighSchool!
person Wheee!!!
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa Nellie! That was cool! (and no, I did not mean to make that pun) But one thing bugs me.. how is Jack gonna eat? What is he going to eat? Or will he just go home?

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