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*Blink*
*Pale*
Woah...THAT taunt? I think I can guess what was in the jar *wince*. Poor Will.
Fantastic beginning, luv! Your portrayal of Jack as what he truly is, a dangerous Pirate, was chilling. I'm pretty sure he didn't get his reputation and survive the seas just by swaggering around all the time. Keep up the good work, and I anxiously await the coming chapters.


Falcon

EXTREMELYY DARK FIC INDEED! BUT, VERY WELL WRITTEN. I HAVE TO ADMIT THE GUTTING PART I HAD TO SKIM THROUGH AS I AM A BIT QUEASY ABOUT SUCH...BUT, I WAS WITH JACK 110%! I THOUGHT TO MYSELF, DYING SLOWLY WASN'T EVEN VICIOUS ENOUGH. I SHIVER AT WHAT MAY HAVE HAPPENED TO OUR SWEET WILL, BUT, I AM SURE YOU WILL BE LETTING US KNOW.

OBVIOUSLY, JACK AND WILL GO BACK A VERY LONG WAY, AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THAT SEQUENCE AS WELL AND TO THE WAY YOU WILL PORTRAY OUR HANDSOME BLACKSMITH.

I DO HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON! AND YES, I AGREE WITH YOU, JACK IS A PIRATE, AND WHAT I GOT FROM HIS PERFORMANCE, WAS THAT THERE WAS A LOT OF UNDERLYING THINGS ABOUT HIM THAT WERE DARK AND VERY MUCH A SECRET. THE LOOK HE GAVE BARBOSSA WHEN HE SHOT HIM IN THE MOVIE....DID YOU SEE IT...NO REMORSE, JUST A STARE...ONE THAT SAID...I TOLD YOU I WOULD GET YOU....

WAY TO GO! I APPLAUD!!

NEWENIT

Thanks for all the side bar info, but is there more. The description was great, very vivid.

Wow...that was graphic...but totally awesome! I love the way you described things & I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you hurry! I will be watching!

I love it. The dark side of Jack is dead on. My compliments.

Wow. I am stunned speechless. I really, really like your story thus far. No problems here about Bloodsoaked!Jack, and I am highly curious to see what you do in future chapters. I hope to see more soon!

~Desertrain ( http://www.fanfiction.net/~desertrain )

Alright, I have a problem with this fic, and the problem is that there is currently only one chapter up. I got to the bottom, and was bitterly disappointed to find that there was no more for me to read at this time. So I command you to make haste and write more!

Wow! Brutal. Not in a bad way though. I mean, it's certainly graphic, but fair warning, so it's all good, strong stomache and all. I am certainly interested in seeing where this is going. And this is a JS/WT fic? Even better. Look forward to more, and please don't leave it hanging too long, especially with this being such a suspense fic already. P.S. What the hell was in that jar?

Oh god, what was in the jar?!

My poor baby! This has certainly caught my interest. And don't apologize for Jack's brutality. In the deleted scenes you see a much different Jack Sparrow and it would lead me, and hopefully others as well, to believe that he's not all smiles and rum. Plus, like you said, he IS a pirate. I think it was very well written.

But what did you do to Will?! LoL! That sounded scarey as hell lol! Oh, I hope he's okay. I know you said he's dead, but you also mention a JS/WT pairing so I'm interested in how that's going to happen. Wow... think I said the word Interesting enough? Interesting. Oh god! Okay, I've prattled on long enough. ^_^

~lydia~

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