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by scatteredlogic

person AngleicDevil
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..well then. I wonder what shall happen when he finds out she's still a virgin. Interesting. Updated soon plz.
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do so well with Jareth and I love your work! Waiting imaptiently for the next segment....hehe
person Talene
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I haven't stopped reading but I was busy for a day or two. Sorry! You write such a wonderful and beautiful story! I love the way you portray Jareth! Later!
person Alesun
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!! Oh that kiss was just beautiful. You wouldn't believe what I was going through waiting for this one. Please update ASAP!! I don't think I could take anymore waiting. Thanks again.
person Kae Noel
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! kissies!!!! enough said ^_^ sent it off, I hope its not too huge.
person Evelyn
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your writing is amazing. You portray the characters in their true manner, but you shape them to do what you want. I'm flabberghasted. Haha, dunno if I spelled that right, but anyway I've been looking at least twice a day to see if you've updated. Jareth and Sarah...mwuahaha! *grins* I'm acting like a twelve year old again. Keep up that great writing and I'll be looking for updates!
person aimless
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once more I bow to the Mistress of the Labyrinth. Your story has sucked me in and left me crying for more. I love the fact that this fic is nothing like your previous one, you have reinvented the characters. They are a bit similar in personality but have a whole different flavor. I simply cannot wait for the next chapter. I will say again that you are the best updater I have ever seen. Whatever you do please continue to write, you have enormous talent.
Peace,
Amy
person Fallen Angel
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much. :) That image refuses to leave my head. It's poking my artistic muse in the arse begging to be put on paper. Thank goodness *that* image is the one that's begging to be drawn, and not one of the more...interesting, though not PG images you write so well. :p
person Alesun
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! *twitches* I need more. *pouts* Please?
person Alesun
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't take it anymore!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!

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