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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This wasn't very good. It's not very well written--the tense changes are dizzying, and it's a blatant Mary-Sue. I think you should work more on your writing before you post your...stuff here.
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo my first reviewer!
Umm i have thought about turning it into a long story, i might do it sometimes soon
Thank you very much :)
Umm i have thought about turning it into a long story, i might do it sometimes soon
Thank you very much :)
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very hot fic! So Elsa had a wild side huh? But of course who could ever resist Sands? Awesome fic, and I know it said FIN but are you planning anymore chapters to this fic?