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schedule
January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**Glomps you in a very unprofessional way** That was wonderful, love! Very expressive, nice balance between complex and simple emotions, loving without being too sappy, and v. erotic. Snaps for you!
schedule
December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cute.
It's good to see that not everyone thinks that our little whelp is all shy and timid.
You really captured the things that really seem so totally real. It good that you've got Will on top, love that.
Great job and well done.
DBG
It's good to see that not everyone thinks that our little whelp is all shy and timid.
You really captured the things that really seem so totally real. It good that you've got Will on top, love that.
Great job and well done.
DBG
schedule
December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This a very interesting epic. I didnt like the way you used Will, but still it was interesting. Keep on going!
schedule
December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. In my mind, it's not really a fic so much as a drabble. But good Lord, it's hot! You accomplished quite a lot in very few words. Good going!!