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Nice title. Since I've reviewed yours, please go back and review mine...oh, and read the third chapter...ah, the tiel of my story is A Pirate's Daughter....only, it's not so short.

What do you mean the end you need to write more i loved the story !!!!

Awwww! So cute! I love this story, it's very well crafted and Jack is very much in-character. ^_~ I love the plot and premise, and even though it's a cliche idea I don't care! It's a good story and that's all that matters to me n_n!

I think you could, and should, go on with this story; make it longer, you know?

Puh-leeeeease? 9_9 I'll love you forever!

~Melantha

P.S. Come to it, I don't think I've ever read a story where Jack had a child...so I guess it's not so clicheer aer all...hum....^.^;;

P.P.S. Shameless Plug: Please read my story, it's called Merry Widow. -^___^-

Pretty Interesting. It actually has a plot line where it doesn't just end in sex. Good Job with the sex scene though. You can even masturbate to it. My novels have gotten some good review and I do unusual couples and ONLY M/F ones. Thats why I like yours. Keep up the good work and if you get a chance, read mine.

And the ligve Happly ever After!

I loved the story ;.; So sweet how jack got to see his little girl. Plus the sex scene was nice. Meoooow!