rate_review Reviews

OMFG...ladydeakin..THAT WAS OFF THE CHAIN..AND THEN SOME. I enjoyed this soo much...it was KICK A$$..... I conveyed all the elements and emotions that a Great story has. You took me on a wild rollercoaster and I don't wanna get off. What a sweet plot and it had me on the edge of my seat till the end. GREAT JOB..and Big Ups to your Mom for the ending...sweeeeeeeeet as pie. I LOVED THIS VERY MUCH..

I was on Smith's side the entire time thinking in some impossible way he'd win, so it was kind of sad to see him lost. ^^; I feel really bad for Smith now, so at the moment I need to go read a good Twin fic with lots of smut...or something >.>;;;;

You're a good writer and I like your ability to allow the reader to feel ones emotions. At the moment I'm really all depressed ^^; You have a wonderful talent.

~Elexies

normally i root for the underdog (brown) to get the girl.... but i mean c'mon... it's smithy!! who does this girl think she is trying to resist him!? lol.

*claps* i love this!! please keep it coming. :)

It semms like our dear Agent Smith skipping all the smalltalk and all the foreplay with Pamela Anderson - and getting straight down to business... Interesting.

Merry Smithmas,
S