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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this was definatly one of the best stories i've read on this site!!!
absolutley fantastic interaaction between Captain Jack and Will.
The ending was absolutley fabulous!! I was..well still am laughing it was so great.
hope to read more from you
Sierra Moon
absolutley fantastic interaaction between Captain Jack and Will.
The ending was absolutley fabulous!! I was..well still am laughing it was so great.
hope to read more from you
Sierra Moon
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Loved that, phew, cooling down now. You captured Jack so perfectly, I could almost see it. Fab.
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good. the action is good. The planning of the acts are thougth out. The only thing that drove me crazy is the spelling of WHELP, not welp.
Good job.
Good job.