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for Past the point of no return

by spikesbint

person Alys
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I am thinking very nasty thoughts about Raoul... but that is what good characterization does. Excellent chapter!
person Britt
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
So, I read the whole story again and would like to add to my last review... Raoul is a motherfucking son of a BITCH! GAR! *sputters incoherently* DIE, you bastard, die! No more feeling sorry for the poor misunderstood fop... EVER!!! Oooh, anything that
person Littleeva
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Please kill Raoul for me. Thank you.
person Sarah
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
OMG.
SUCH a wonderful chapter.
Nothing turned out the way I expected it to, but that's a good thing. It's so refreshing in a way, and it kept my heart pounding.
Please write more! I can't wait until the next chapter. :D
person LittleEva
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Here's another review.

First I think you are an awesome writer; you know how to map a sex scene and that's not easy.

But I have a bit of an issue. I said I wanted Raoul dead and yes, he is a prick but he is only reacting to Christine's bad behav
person La Foamy
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh I just.. wanna.. smash that.. fop's head in... dhjiftyj. *bashes things* AHH~!

Please please update soon.. ugh.. *whimpers*.. happy endings, happy endings.. *clings to knees, rocks back and forth* cheesecakes and rainbows.. puppy dogs..
person Reviewer
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god......that's so horrible......I even began to get a little teary eyed myself.....if the phantom actually leaves....and she has to live with that monster I will be completely upset! Update soon the phantom and christine have to see each other.
person J Z
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
*screams words she didn't even think she knew and beats Raoul with an entire forest of clubs and sticks* Okay, I think it's safe to say that I don't feel sorry for him any longer. Bravo, on your masterpiece. Only truly excellent writing can make me fee

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