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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Who dies? *chants Raoul* *rpeats chant* *rocks back and forth* *chants Raoul* :D More soon huni... LOL Great cliffy... *hiss* *frown* EVIL! :P jokes cya Angela xXx
Aisling
Aisling
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
EVIL EVIL EVIL CLIFFIE!!!
Please write soon. :(
Please write soon. :(
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Aagh! The cliffhanger! >_<;;
But, I did like the chapter very much. :D
Please keep updating, and soon! The suspense is just about killing me!
But, I did like the chapter very much. :D
Please keep updating, and soon! The suspense is just about killing me!
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful!!!!! You are a fabulous writer! This is the first place I visit each morning when I get online-to see if you've posted another chapter! Keep up the good work! I want to see this at Barnes and Noble in the future!!
Jennifer T.
Jennifer T.
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
First review I've done here on AFFN. I've been reading along for some time now and really enjoy your story.
One thing that stands out for me in your writing is your skill at pacing. You give the reader enough time to fully experience each emotion bef
One thing that stands out for me in your writing is your skill at pacing. You give the reader enough time to fully experience each emotion bef
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, there better have been something wrong with the guns. BOTH guns, actually. I don't want either to die. Erik because...well, he's Erik. :) And Raoul, because he really wasn't a bad person in this story...I don't remember if I've already sa
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I just knew you were going to leave it that way...I can't wait to see what happens.
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
*spazzes*
Well, very good chapter... *spazz*... totally loved it. *spazz* So good... *spazz*
OMG - EVIL *spazz* CLIFF*spazz*HANGER! *spazzity spazz*
Seriously - very good chapter and you KNOW that you MUST update rather soon. Or else the spaz
Well, very good chapter... *spazz*... totally loved it. *spazz* So good... *spazz*
OMG - EVIL *spazz* CLIFF*spazz*HANGER! *spazzity spazz*
Seriously - very good chapter and you KNOW that you MUST update rather soon. Or else the spaz
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
...weeping...please don't take Phantom away...please
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Well I really like it so far, it is really staying true to the characters, but it is moving a bit to slow. I had expected Christine to have her baby long before now. Great Cliff-Hanger though! This is one of those stories you go and check if there is a n