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for Past the point of no return

by spikesbint

person Salomé
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Oh it was perfect!!!! Damn nearly made me cry. *blushes* I'd love to see an epilogue chapter. You ended the story beautifully, but it does leave one wanting more. I also wanted to ask if you would mind emailing me your story. I'll probably want
person Rachel
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Don't leave it there! I hope you update soon. It's one of the things I have loved about your story, apart from the excelent emotive writing are the regular updates. I will keep my eye out for chapter 11 and hope it will not be long in coming. I understa
person Kristine
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
::happy sigh:: Oh, that was perfect. I can't say anything else other than that. Your fic was my first POTO sex fic (erm, please don't take offense that I just called it that...ehehehe), and I gotta say that it's the best one out there!! You capture
person Skimbleshanks
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals in delight* Erik's gonna be a Daddy! Yeay!
*Eventually composes herself* Sorry, I get a bit carried away sometimes!
What's gonna happen with Raoul? Hmmmm............

Excellent chapter!

Anxiously looking forward for the next chapter!

person Jecca
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Dude, Raoul died! *is in awe* I didn't think he'd ... DIE. Especially by Christine's "hands". Though, he kind of deserved it. He was a friggin' loony-bin, eh? But, y'know... even though I don't like Raoul... I STILL feel really bad for him.
person Meg
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
This story is AMAZING!!! Keep it going!
person Jess
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant conclusion....as far as an epiloque.....hmmm...not necessary, but could be neat also. Sometimes it's best to leave things as they are though & not run it to the edge....
person Anon
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
So, Meg winds up with the neglected husband?
person Dani
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
*WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA* THats so BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! YES YES MORE! maybe based in a few years, like when Erik Jr. is around 5/6 years old. that would be so sweet! but even more so if he had a Baby sister! *hint hint*
person Skimbleshanks
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilo

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