rate_review Reviews

I have enjoyed this story soo much! I realize i reveiwed it earlier, but i have finished reading it. IM so excited for more.

I will never look at salt the same again... o_O You don't know how much it's killing me to not read the rest in one sitting. I could, but then I would be beyond everyone here and I couldn't do that to the rest of the people here. AHHHH!

I've got a few comments from the last chapter as well: Still no clue as to the punisment of Vivienne. We may get that resolved maybe next chapter? I liked Paslia's "punishment". Not to hard, but enough to make her think about what she has done.

Do you know your story here shows me how bad I am. No really. You make me want to do better. I am going all out on my next project (aside from the story that will go along with my challenge).

LOL, why the challenge I issued for all of AFF.net (check out my profile ;) ). I was hoping you could write a Jareth/[The Challenge] fic since you write him so good! As for the rest of you, I know why he can post a chapter a day but I'll leave that for him to tell! (Don't worry scatteredlogic, I only looked at the cast page. I havn't read ahead!)

Anyway, great chapter! I wonder how Jareth and Sarah will get past this one?!

AHH!!! *falls over* @.@ ANOTHER roadblock! *cries* Why? Well, Sarah does have a point...But we still know they'll end up happy together, right? It's even in the book! ^_^ Thanks, I feel a lot better now. And I'm looking forward to the sequel. Great chapter! Great story! Great author! =D

Im totally hooked on this story. Im only on the chapter that comes after "the date." I expect good things.

I am still here and reading. So much going on.....Why oh, why must Sarah be so presumptuous? Hasn't she learned by now that there always 2 sides to a story (at least) and that with magic....anything is possible. That is the basis of magic, I believe...that reality is what you make it. Magic is possibility and the ability to use magic is forming that possibility to your will. That is my view in a nutshell and very little will change my mind. ;) Hasta manana!

*cackles in maniacal glee* I'd forgotten that was the next bit of the song! Oh, how excruciatingly appropriate! *continues laughing* Ahhhhh..... I just adore the little romantic bits in the story. I'd probably faint if someone proposed to me after all that. It's so sweet and romantic and perfect. *le sigh* Sarah is a damned lucky woman.

I admit I had avoided this lsection at first. I finally decided to read one and I am SO glad I chose yours. It was lovely and well-written. I eagerly await the rest.

She-Cat

I WAS supposed to get some sleep tonight... Ah, well. Read this all in one sitting, with lots of giggling, concern, and more giggling. ^-^ Very good writting style, you keep things flowing very well, and have some great diptiiptions.

I worry that Sarah and Jareth got over the fear of each other bit a LITTLE fast in the first few chapters, but its the Underground, I'll forgive ya. And you put them through enough afterwards. VEG

I just have ONE complaint. Not ENOUGH of the NC-17 stuff. ^-^ I mean, what you've got is nice, but where's the description of Jareth's great techniques? I demand a full chapter to them in the bedroom (Or other romantic setting of your choice), with at least 3/4 of it without their clothing on! VEG I have seriously cleaned out most of my resources for gooomanomantic porn for characters I like and want to be together. I need more to survive!! ^-^

Continue! I have NO clue what you're going to pull off in the last chapters, so I'm looking forward to it. ^-^

ha! suck on that, viviene! *happy dance* i cant wait to see what jareth does to her that is better than a good thourough ass kicking, although i still think sarah should have been allowed to do it, just this once *mischief*....i'm so glad ethain wisened up too, he's too cool to be so chauvanistic...the scene in the hedge maze sounds so pretty, i wish i could see it! anywho, i'll be waiting over ie coe corner for the next update, dreaming of evil things to do to viviene *evil* :D