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for A Necessary Deception

by scatteredlogic

person Em
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like jareths mother already, but i have a horrible feeling that everthing is going a bit tooooo smoothly!? anyway, i love the story ( i'll never get tired of saying that! :) and can't wait for the next chapter! :)
person Anna
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! The last line was priceless. I'm glad that Sarah's meeting with Jareth's mother went rather well. I am looking forward to finding out what Jareth has in mind for Vivienne's punishment. Keep up the wonderful work, and please update soon!
person Talene
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Things are so close nI haI have Labrynth on DVD and your story made me want to watch it again but, alas.....my DVD player is being stubborn and not allowing me to. *pouts* Hopefully me hubby can fix it. Wonderful chappie! Hasta manana!
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! That was great! Just what she deserves! You know, this chapter got me thinking. Are the trolls going to be the focus for the squal?
person Klep
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There's so much going on in this chapter, I don't know where to start! ^_^ The punishments for Carden and Vivienne were fitting, especially Viv's. What I'd give to see her face when she heard she'd marry a Troll! LOL! =D I do feel sad for Khopok though; being stuck with her for the sake of his people. =P The whole Troll alliance thing is interesting too. I've got a hunch about something, but I'll keep it to myself for now. ~_^
Sarah's dress sounds beautiful! *dreamy eyed* And I am really looking forward to the next chapter. *gets al gushy again* It was sweet how Jareth "freed" her at the end. I'm sure they'll have just as interesting a relationship after they're wed. Looking forward to the grand finale! ~_^
person Klep
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really do like this chapter. ^^ It gives us a look at Jareth's family and what his life is like as the Goblin King. *cheers* Yay! The wedding is coming up! *sigh* I love weddings! *starry-eyed* I just know it'll be spectacular! Again, wonderfully written chapter! =D
person em
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) I'm a very happy bunny right now! :) you had me worried for a while there, i thought they might have broken up, if that had happend i think mine and every other reader of this fanfic would have sunk into depression! im soo happy everything is back to normal! and i loved the "cheaky" lovin' that was going on at the end too ;) you minx! :) canwaitwait for the rest
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I reasted and got a nap today. Thank you.;) I loved your chapter. Sounds like the typical parents. hehe See you tomorrow.
person Talene
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You will and I understand very well her difficulties. It wasn't my mother who did it to me but I have issues as well. They are very hard to overcome. You have to be willing to take a chance at being hurt as well as being willing to fly on faith upon occasion. It is never easy and always scarey. Listen to the words Of Mike and the Mechanics 'Taken In'. Very appripo I believe. (Forgive me spelling. Haven't had but maybe 15 hours sleep in 3 or 4 days. Can't remember anymore. hehe I'll be here tomorrow.
person Klep
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's fitting how Jareth helped Sarah overcome her insecurities about their relationship in that way. The salt caverns. Perfect setting! And a very sexy love scene as well! ~_^ I love happy endings too! Can't wait to see what happens next! =D

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