rate_review Reviews

A beautifully written fanfic! Don't ever stop sharing the gift you have for writing because it would be a shame! :)

Oh, this was such a wonderful finale! ^_^ I'm almost sorry to see it end! =P All in all, it was a joy reading this story. You are a truly talented author, and I applaud your skills. I will certainly be looking forward to the sequel and any future tales you may share with us! =D Viva Scattered Logic!

Don't think that I abandoned you. I didn't. I especially liked the last scene. That was so fun! I have enjoyed your story and look forward to more from you. Not of this story, no but, of others. Thank you and good luck!

You know what, you should post the "The 20 Rules of Jareth/Sarah Labyrinth Fan Fiction" here. Very funny!

Aw! *teary-eyed* That was magnificentniffniff* Definitely a fairy-tale wedding. The dress is beautiful! Thanks for the link. ^_^ This is a wonderful story and the epilogue will surely be a memorable closing to such an enchanting tale. ;) I had a feeling that the sequel will indeed involve Khopok, the Troll kindgdom, and the rest. And, I'm guessing the conflict will some how be political, maybe? ^_^ I'm sure you'll deliver just as interesting a storyline as you did here. Well done! =D

Only two more chapters! OH NO!! What am i going to have to read?? I hope the sequel comes soon. The next two chapters will be happy ones, not ones that will make me feel sorry for sarah and Jareth, will they? They totally need a break. I look forward to nextnext one. :D

Aww, that was sweet of Sarah in the last thing she said! I'm looking forward to the "Escher Room" honeymoon! ;)

Oh, YES. That kind of punishment is so very, very like the fae. I bow to you in admiration.
And that scene of Jareth wanting Sarah to kneel and her assumption about the reason was priceless...
I love this story... it's well researched, makes sense in itself, and (what I cannot stress enough) the adult scenes fit smoothly into the flow of storytelling instead of standing out like sore thumbs... this is so rare and so very welcome. Mind you, there's nothing wrong with a PWP adult story, but the real trouble usually starts when an author starts with a sex scene and then feels compelled to somehow expand and force a plot around it. In this piece, it's as it should be, smooth and believable, written in taste and with neither too little nor too much emphasis and detail (nothing worse than some author going technical...ugh)
I'm babbling, am I not? Sorry...
Okay, this is offtopic, but have you read the Faery books by Laurell K Hamilton (Kiss of Shadows was the first one if I remember correctly)? If not, you might like them...

yay! I couldn't think of a better punishment for Vivienne!! Revenge is sweet! I can't wait until the wedding chapter, but very sad to hear you are nearly finished! :( what will i do now..hopefully you might start a new story? *hint* hehe, i love your work, see you tomorrow!

Great chapter. I must confess that the punishment for Vivienne is hillarious. *Grins* I think it's a befitting punishment. Hey at least it's better then death, but of course she wouldn't see it that way. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm really looking forward to it. Please update soon!