rate_review Reviews

You should make a sequel! What happens to Sarah? Does she get to become immortal too? And what happens with their child?? The story was awesome!

You're did an awesome job with this story!! Just enough dialogue and just enough description of the surroundings! Good balance and good job!

It deleted some of my writing! "You're a great writer!" was the first sentence lol

The Epilogue was the best sex scene, and I LOOOOOOOVELOVELOVELOVE the political intrigue and politics and gah! I love that stuff! Brennen is a flirt, too, and Breena was very sweet--from the way you times her appearance I was suspicious at first, but slowly trusted her presence, which I loved. Very real characters, my lady *bows in respect*

A very good story with believable well evolved characters, the plot twists and turns were cleverly thought out and I enjoyed this story very much

Wondeful story, beautifully written, I was hooked after reading the first chapter. I can't wait till the sequel is posted :o)

Very nice. I really enjoyed this story. Will we ever see what Jarath had planned to deal with the fact that Sarah will age and die?

This is the first story I read on AFF (and is likely to be what led me through it, via a google search for Labyrinth fanfic). It's a stunning and intricate tapestry of a tale.

I spent all night reading this, literally. I began reading this before dinner time yesterday until 6am in the morning for crying out loud. And i still hadn't finished it. Well, now i have. First thing i did when i woke up. I'm really glad i found this story of yours. I also found another of yours, i do believe of Sarah and Jareth in that lovely little cabin which i still have to review. And i'm quite happy to say i enjoyed this story a lot actually. Everytime you have him say "Sarah..." I swear i can hear his voice from the movie, where he's there, leaving that pause inbetween her name and the rest of his sentence. That stuck with me since the first time i saw the movie, which was years ago. And oh so long ago e i e i last watched it. And now, well, i have convinced myself that i need to buy it, hmm, i wonder if they have it on DVD *chuckles* rather nicely done though, i enjoyed reading it a great deal, and i hope you produce more of this lovely work sometime soon. Thanks for the wonderful story to read, it kept me quite entertained while i'm getting over being ill, keeps my mind off of feeling miserable and gives me a reason to smile.

hiya :D well, heh, i finally got around to reviewing your story...*feels sheepish*...sorry it took so long, but i couldn't go without reviewing it eventually :D...wonderful, spectacular, i loved it! it was brilliantly done! there were a few things that i was wondering about that didn't really get answerbut but i saw that you intend to write a sequal, so i'll wait and see if they get answered there. I hope you come out with it soon, i can't wait to see what happens next in this tale. you are a remarkable author, thank you for sharing your work. until the sequal :D

~~Wyrm of Souls