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for A Necessary Deception

by scatteredlogic

person aimless
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Just when oughought the plot could not get anymore twisty you added a few more curves. :) Really looking foreward to the next installment, heck the whole rest of the story. Kudos to you and your delightfully wicked mind. ;)
person emma
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG this fanfic is brilliant, iv been looking for a good labyirnth story for ages!!! thank you sooooooo much, and please update soon, i cant wait to read the rest!!
person Klep
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH GOSH! Pregnancy abound! =D LOL! What's the poor goblin king to do? Hope it gets resolved though...like Viv *accidentally* falling off a cliff...*whistles innocently* ~_^
person Orin Le�� L
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ARG.. You have created this wonderful story to read and then you leave it hanging there! I'm going to pester you now util it is done. Because i am like that, and i really want to see the end of this, it's just too good! (I always loved the movie, but i really love this continuation, much better than a one-shot) ^_^
person Orin Leland
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Arg! You did it again... I'm going to be waiting very impateintly to find out just when Sarah decides to come out of her funk and actually tell someone that she's pregnant. And since she is, why on earth hasn't the healer informed Jareth, considering it's his heir? Hmm?

Blar, I will wait I guess. hurry though!
person Raine
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Labryth has been one of my favorite movies since I was a child. I love the way you have expanded on the original story. Your explination of the movie is not only unique, but intertaining and very well writen. I hope you update soon.
person Kitrazzle Fayn
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww... This is why I love this story. Fantastic characters, intrigue, true love that's not Fairytale Perfect. *sighs happily* Sarah is taking the whole situation a lot better then I probably would. Which makes sense, really. Thanu evu ever so much for writing this.
person Klep
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw! *teary eyed* This gets beter with each chapter! =) The Ethain/Breena development is intriguing as well. Kudos!
person Crystal
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please get the next chapter out soon...I can't believe you left it there. I also can't believe I've overlooked this fic for so long, its absolutely fantastic, I love way way you write Jareth...and the fact that Sarah hasn't turned into a soppy, simpering mess over him as she is wont to do in fanfiction (although lets be fair, what girl wouldn't!?). Thanks for a great fic and please keep the updates coming!
person aimless
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I only recently discovered Labyrinth Fan fiction on the net and yours is the best I have read so far. Please keep the chapters coming. It is really nice that you update regularly since the suspense is kng mng me. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

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