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aww, i feel so sorry for Jareth and Sarah, that vivienne is gonna get whats coming to her!!!! love the story so far!! :)

*happy dance* yay! i almost jumped out of my chair and squealed when i read that last part! lol, you certainly know to bto build the suspense, i cant wait to see what they do to that healer to make him talk! hehehe...*evil*...hurry and post asap, i'm falling out of my chair here! *falls* ow...

:: dies :: Ooo, just wait till Jareth finds out Viviene is lying to him, he'll drop her in the Bog of Everlasting Stench (I have a pair of jeans I swear was dropped in that... stupantsants) or worse I hope.. He needs to find out soon though.

This is excellent though, keep it up! I'm going to have a friend of mine read this too, she will love it! ^_^

*growls and stamps and makes dire threats against Vivienne's continued wellbeing should they over be in the same room together*

No cliff? *shrugs* How about a lightning bolt? Or, hey, falling down the castle tower's stairs works just as well. But, I guess you don't want to be predictable. ~_^ Anyway, this chapter was so emotional! I loved it! <3 I'm sure the next chapter will be just as interesting. Kudos! =)

love it love it love it!!! this is great! your a brilliant writer, and i have to admit you actually made me cry in the last chapter, very emotional, i really want to find out what happens after Jareth find out sarah is also pregnant!!! update soon, well all love you!

so when is sarah gonna drop the baby bomb? i bet jareth finds out from doreniel(sp?). I dont blame sarah for being depressed, and i think she's in the right being so sad...after all, what kind of future can she have if she's going to have an illematemate baby, have to be looked down on the rest of her life by that haughty bitch viviene and she's not even allowed to leave the castle and the man she loves has to pretend that he doesnt giveamn amn about her...even if it isnt fair to jareth either, i'd say she's pretty well within her rights to be depressed and unfair....on a lighter note, heh, i think breena and ethian are gonna fall in love! *happy dance* that would be so cute! i cant wait for the next update, come on, let the baby cat out of the bag!!! :D happy writing!

Oh you tease you...;) What an addiction you have created. All I can say is more chapters, more chapters, more chapters. I absolutley adore your saga so far. Keep up the excellent work and I look foreward to your next several installments with exquisite anticipation.

I have read this story from chapter one on and I must tell you how impressed I am with it! It is absolutely wonderful!! I hope you resolve everything for them soon and update soon as well!

AAAAAAAAARGH!!!! marcan and that bitch better get violently killed by the end of this or i'm gonna have to do it myself! i was about to yell at my computer it made me so mad! what's gonna happen to sarah and her baby then? how does that work, if he's got two girl pregnant, is he bound by honor to marry both, or does sarah's baby just get to be born a bastard? grrrrr...i bet jareth goes ghetto on viviene's ass when he finds out she was lying!!! and i bet sarah isnt going to just sit there and be his mistress while he goes and marries viviene, she's gonna be a wreck. this story is so well written and creative! dont stop now, you're doing great!!! cant wait for more!!!