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*sob* i can't much more excitmenol, ol, the last chapter was amazing, i was so worried something would happen to jareth, evil marcan, he deserved what he got, and i can't wait for the happy J/S makeup chapter hehe, love the story!!

wow...plot twist...heh heh heh *evil* served him right, damned stupid bastard...but now viviene is gonna try and play the hero! erg, i almost felt sorry for her when she got hit and was all confused...almost...then it passed and my sanity returned and i still wanna see her get her ass kicked...*evil*...and what was with ethain getting all flustered about breena? he seemed so cool! dont do it ethain! dont turn into a male pig! brennan really was kinda coldblooded, but that just makes him all the cooler, he knows who and what he is, he knows what has to be done and then does it, and thats a respectable quality, so he's still totally cool in my book...anywho, i am rambli.com.comes from not sleeping for a day and a half...oh well, i cant wait for more, sorry i'm not feeling so giddy right now, i'm too tired to be hyper...but dont worry, tomorrow or the next day i'll be back with a vengence *mischief* heh, so look out, hon :P happy writing!:D

After rereading chapter 22, I would like you to read my challenge. ;)

Hello, I'm reading chapter 8 now and will review agian after I finish. Anyway, I would like to say this is the most interesting Labyrinth story I've read. Do you know of any other good Labyrinth fics? Email me the urls if you do.

Wow! I wonder what's going to happen next? Now Jareth knows the truth what will happen to Vivienne? Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work. And Yea for Sarah. She got him good! Please update soon!!

Are you telling me that this is the end of the story? I dearly hope not! There is still so much to tell! And as before.....I will see you tomorrow eagerly looking for another chapter to your wonderful and beautiful tale!

Oh yes...i am still following the story and loving the intrigue. You are a wonderful spinner of tales. I wish I could do half as well and update as quickly on mine. See you tomorrow!

Wow, it getting better and better! Looking forward to chapter 29 (The end and the big sex scence as well. I've got a dirty mind. :p ) Anyway, any planned smutt between Breena and Ethain? Speaking of Breena, ie wae was at the party where everyone of the girls slept with Jareth, I was wondering if she did?

Beautiful! *tears* The emotion is so rich here! *snif* Sweet! But, Marcan seemed too calm there...Ooh...He's got something planned alright! Suspense! ^_^ Awesome chapter! You're the best!

WOOP WOOP! they have sussed her out!! i can't wait until jareth hears about thisain ain well done!!