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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* I love this chapter! ^_^ Maybe even more than the last! And yes, it did live up to my expectations. Thank you! *giddy* I think you should have let Sarah kick Viv's ass though. ~_^ But, I'm sure Jareth has something appropriate planned. And I'm glad you plan to write an Ethain/Breena story. Maybe, you'll give that hunk Brennan his own tale as well? =D Again, well done!
(I would've reviewed sooner, but I was sick. The agony...I couldn't read your fic! X.X)
(I would've reviewed sooner, but I was sick. The agony...I couldn't read your fic! X.X)
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awww!! i loved the romance, they do deserve some happiness! :) but i'm worried now about what you said, if they go through anymore problems i may cry!! *sob* can't wait to seat wat will get in the way of their happiness! thanks again for a brilliant chapter, i love reading them before i go to work, with my cup of wake up tea. what more do you need in life? :)
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sweet! This is coming along so well! Can't wait for the next chapter! Are we going to get to see the birth of their child?
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cavorts with joy* Ding dong, the Marcan's dead! The Marcan's dead, Mar Marcan's dead! *giggles evilly*
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So very beautiful.....i wish I could get through my chapters as quickly as you. Alas.....I take forever. The fact that there is very little time to write doesn't help matters either. Ah well....hasta na. na.
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aha! =D The black-hearted knave dies! *cheers* As Viv Viv...Well, I guess her actions were commendable in the end. Sort of. -_-* Awesome chapter, as always! More Sarah/Jareth goodness to come! ^_^
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, simply wonderfull! So now we can have 7 full chapters of just Sarah and Jareth! Woo-Hoo!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! what a chapter! I am so glad it was sarah that got to be the one to take out Marcan. I applaud your wonderful storytelling. Your writing of the emotions of the characters are right on the money. The fact that you had sarah so upset after she stabbed Marcan was very true to life. It would be upsetting to her to take a life, but she would not hesitate to do so if she was protecting someone she loved. I still hope Vivianne gets what is coming to her. I do not think she confessed out of any feelings for Jareth but only to save her own skin. I say again this is the BEST fanfiction I have ever read bar none. You should be very proud of your creation. When i got done reading chapter 22 I felt like standing up and cheering. I hope you continue to write whether it be fan fiction or your own original creations. Thsi has been the most enjoyable read I have had in a while and look forward to more. for making my day ;)
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, more of the classic anti-magic ingredients...salt and iron.
Personally, I would have expected to have iron play a part in Marcan's demise :) but that might be just wishful thinking, as I would have opted to hit him to death with a horseshoe (remoof tof the horse beforehand is entirely optional), but that's just me.
Being stabbed through the lung is quite appropriate, though.
Hmm, what will Jareth do to Vivienne now...I somehow don't see him as someone who would let her get away with a slap on the wrists. After all, you don't get to be someone at the Seelie court without having at least a good measure of ruthlessness...hmmmm. Even if it's not immediately fatal it will certainly be humiliating and an example...I don't envy her right now :)
I'll be holding my breath for the next chapter....I already said it but will say it again, this must be one of the best stories I've read on the 'net, and since I consider myself a fan fiction veteran (been on the 'net long before there wWW ;WW ;) ) this is not something I'd say lightly...
(BTW,Yes, I'm aware of what my nickname signifies, and it's on purpose...I've always been interested in all kinds of mythology.)
Personally, I would have expected to have iron play a part in Marcan's demise :) but that might be just wishful thinking, as I would have opted to hit him to death with a horseshoe (remoof tof the horse beforehand is entirely optional), but that's just me.
Being stabbed through the lung is quite appropriate, though.
Hmm, what will Jareth do to Vivienne now...I somehow don't see him as someone who would let her get away with a slap on the wrists. After all, you don't get to be someone at the Seelie court without having at least a good measure of ruthlessness...hmmmm. Even if it's not immediately fatal it will certainly be humiliating and an example...I don't envy her right now :)
I'll be holding my breath for the next chapter....I already said it but will say it again, this must be one of the best stories I've read on the 'net, and since I consider myself a fan fiction veteran (been on the 'net long before there wWW ;WW ;) ) this is not something I'd say lightly...
(BTW,Yes, I'm aware of what my nickname signifies, and it's on purpose...I've always been interested in all kinds of mythology.)
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sob* i can't much more excitment! lol the last chapter was amazing, i was so worried something would happen to jareth, evil marcan, he deserved what he got! can't wait for the happy J/S makeup chapter hehe!! love the story!!!