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for Pain in the Arse

by Kleio

person Race
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this a lot, and what I think I liked best was how in character you kept Will and Jack. I can just see Will waffling over what he wants, and Jack, as usual, knowing full well how to get what *he* wants.

Loved them bantering and sniping, too.
person Sarryn
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Humorous and quite, quite sexy. Brilliant!
person lostmarbles
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!
Hehehhehee! This was so good! Oh my lord! I loved it. Kinda wish the actual sex scene was a little longer, but that's just the perv in me te he. I like how you wrote Jack I think you got him perfect! And Will was just too precious. I really, really, really, really liked it! Really! It was just too good for words. I thought Will sitting there chatting all night while poor old Jackie was trying to sleep was just too cute! I loved it! I know I can relate to both of them in that situation. lol!

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