rate_review Reviews

You definately have to update! This is better than excelent. ^_^ Finally, a fic that dosn't take about 5 chapters for the main characters to meet. :)

I hope this is not the end???

I liked this. It was sweet without being overly so. And I liked Anna.

Sorry! Igot got on the last review. Your formatting is a bit hard to read. But then I've found this site very hard to get the formatting right on. I find that I have to copy and paste into the box to get anything half way decent and any html has to be left out. I hope this helps as I think it's worth the time to correct this story.
Alternatively you can post this in fanfiction.net where they still accept R rated stories and it's a lot easier to upload and manage your stories on there.

I would very much like to read your story, and I did read the first chapter. But the formatting is so convoluted that it is very hard to get through. You have a good idea, and it seems that you can write well enough. I just wish that it was a smoother read.