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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an absolutely awesome story. I could have never seen that pair in a million years but you so made it work. You're writing is very good. that ending was so sad i so wanted to cry, poor tom and dorien (i never thought id say that) any way that was quite a lovely story and ill be sure to check out more of your stuff. Keep up the great job.
TTFN^-^
TTFN^-^
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought I'd leave you a review, as, unlike most of the NC-17 I've read, I actually liked your fic. :)
Your characterization is good, and you describe Dorian's mannerisms well. Tom is very much like he was in the movie (if not neccessarily in the books.) I was pleased to see that you knew enough about Dorian's actual, non-movie history to make reference to his "artist friend," Basil Hallward. I thought your dialogue was excellent, other than one little problem-- I think that swearing doesn't fit in with LXG, mostly because these characters are from Victorian novels-- "Hell" and "Damn" were shocking in those times. It's a small problem, though.
I have to tell you, though, out of the entire fic, I liked the non-sex scenes better than the NC-17 bit.
Your characterization is good, and you describe Dorian's mannerisms well. Tom is very much like he was in the movie (if not neccessarily in the books.) I was pleased to see that you knew enough about Dorian's actual, non-movie history to make reference to his "artist friend," Basil Hallward. I thought your dialogue was excellent, other than one little problem-- I think that swearing doesn't fit in with LXG, mostly because these characters are from Victorian novels-- "Hell" and "Damn" were shocking in those times. It's a small problem, though.
I have to tell you, though, out of the entire fic, I liked the non-sex scenes better than the NC-17 bit.
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, great description and emotion, so sad.
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hate you for this story and I love you for it. Arg! *shakes fist* It was so good but it upset me so much. Conflict of opinions is a good thing. Usually means I loved it, I just don't want to accept it yet. Of course, if you write more on this, I'll read it.
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You did the movie characters such justice! I couldn't stop reading it. It was an amazing piece of work. And I am glad you picked this canon as well- thooys oys were begging to be slashed. ;) Excellent story all around.
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October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please more! such a beautiful story! can´t wait to read more of this brilliant writing!
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September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. I really wish it had a happy ending, though I enjoyed it very much. Sequel?
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just- wow. One brief moment of happiness, then *BOOM*, in comes angst to kick our asses back to the real world. It was beautiful, and I hope to see much more of your work in this particular fandom.
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story, I love the pair, can't wait to read more of your stories!!
Rosalyn Star
Rosalyn Star
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I love the movie and I also love your story, I love how well the story is written and the pair!! I can't wait to read more of your stories!!
Angel Girl
Angel Girl