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lol... sure it is, Will. *snicker* I'm enjoying this fic a lot... I've never read a PotC fic before, but this is pretty damn good as far as my 'usual standards' go. So thanks for writing it... (I always feel good authors deserve as many thank-you's as I can give...). It's a great fic. ^___^

CH5: Aww... I'm sorry your laptop broke... that's never any fun. *hates it when hers has kiniption fits and refuses to work* ^^;; I'll wait her patiently for the last chapter.... *pause* but ony for about four more weeks... O_o;; Ja ne!

This is brilliant, I can't wait for the next chapter. The words just flow from the page/screen?! Hope the computer is fixed soon, keep writing won't you?

Good stuff, though the pace of it all is a little fast. Not that I usually like filler, but some sort of event between Will's joining the crew and the two of them confessing their feelings would have been nice. Anyway though, I love to beta for mechanics (I've acquired a local title of "Grammar Queen" for a reason) and if you'd let me, I'd be honored to be your beta reader. I could also go through this whole story and send it back, if it wouldn't be too much trouble to upload it. (Don't worry, if I don't get an e-mail, I'll just safely assume my offer is rejected.) Can't wait for the last chapter! ^_^

i love this story! pleas, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeas write more soon!
love
Meril

Waaaahhhh! Keep going! I command it! *bands author gently* Keep writing, you scallawag. It's fantastic.

Slash, pirate style!
-Will

oooooo, very nice, and i like how they came together, very nice job i say say. i hope you get your computer back soon.

*lol* very nice so far, you'll be continuing this soon, savvy? i'd like to see the young whelp try to jack sparrow

I have to write on wordpad too. You may want to check out http://www.spellcheck.net. It's worked wonders for me. ;) I like what you've got so far. And like that Jack didn't just 'oh, lovely, let's fall into bed' in the first chapter. Even if he does seem to me a 'want, take, have' type of person. It'll be interesting to see where you go with this.

im torn here. longerchapters, or quicker updates... longerchap... DAMN YOU! YOUR STORY ISSPO GOOD I DONT KNOWWHICH TO ASK FOR! CANT YOU JUST TYPE FASTER OR SOMETHING?!!!!