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September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, I like the anonymity of each character until the second scene. How very saddening...good thing we know that Jack doesn't hang after all ^.^
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September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was almost heartbreaking. I felt sorry for Elizabeth. At that point, Jack and Will too, but at least I know Jack doesn't die.
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September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. . .the vividness of the emotion. . .for a short story, this one definitely packed a punch. I applaud you for bringing a tear to my eyes. :-D
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September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness... That was so sad. This is the first story that ever looked at the trip back to Port Royal in the manner. I really enjoyed it, especially the fact that Liz didn't throw a fit about Will and Jack. Good job!
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September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You wrote that so well, had me practically in tears. I hope you plan on writing more. So far you have the makings of an excellent story.