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Reviews for Eyes

By : Pasque
  • From M2M on October 15, 2007
    Wow. Words fail me. This was (no pun-swear)beautiful. Nice work. You really grasped the characters and nailed them to a tee.
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  • From ANON - Rob on July 05, 2006
    I thought this was great. Very well written to keep it sexy, but not nasty. I'd love to see you do one for if Lester hadn't stopped when Angela said she was a virgin.
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  • From ANON - Meredith on September 02, 2005
    That was amazing, i trully believed the characters could have been thinking what you showed. So good.
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  • From ANON - darkflame on August 15, 2004
    awesome! write more - you capture them so well.
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  • From ANON - MuseĨ w on June 04, 2004
    Great story, well written, infact it was VERY well written. My friend says it made her very horny.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 24, 2003
    Wow. I didn't expect it to be so wondefully written. Congrats.
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  • From ANON - polexia on October 07, 2003
    That was really beautiful. You use words that are sorrowfully underused in fiction today and Janie is very authentic. This could be pretty sappy considering the personality and word choices of Ricky but you've captured him without allowing him to become a caricature. Very well done. Will you write more or for other fandoms? You have avery nice voice.
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  • From ANON - ambushbug on September 21, 2003
    what an excellent story....well written, and you delve into the character of jane burnham in a very real and effective way.....you catch the essence of her character better than I did...rickey too....would love to see you write a story about angela....
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  • From Nifty225 on September 14, 2003
    I like it, alot! You really kept it coherent with the movie.
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  • From Pasque on August 17, 2003
    Hey guys this is the author and I've just re-read the story and found a couple of typos so I just wa to to say sorry about that I must've missed them when I spellchecked.

    Hope you enjoyed it anyway,

    Love Pasque

    XXX
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  • From ANON - me on August 17, 2003
    I simply loved this story! It's great written, I hope you make a sequel. You really developed the characters the way they are, what I thinl in this case must have been kind of difficult. Iwaitwaiting other chaps, so hurry up and write more.
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