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Reviews for Crew of the Damned

By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2005
    Enjoying this one as well! Your vampires remind me of some in a book I read, "Knights of the Blood" by Scott MacMillan and Katherine Kurtz. They had enhanced strength and healing, and enhanced senses. They were photosensitive and didn't age. And, of course, drank blood. Slight photosensitivity, no problems with holy items, silver, etc. I like the psychic connection...very interesting. It could make for a very possessive & and overbearing Jack *delicious shiver*. Why didn't Jack feed Gibbs and Ana like he's feeding Willl, if it would provide a long-term boost to their control? Anyway, I hope you continue this story.
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  • From ANON - The Last Kitten on March 13, 2004
    I.....love....this.....story. @_@ I never thought about Vampires in POTC, and you wrote the story incredably well. I just wanted to add my two cents and say that it's ok if you don't have a definite ending. I would love the story to go on forever. I'll be looking out for the next chapter and every time I come to AFF.net ay tay that you never have writers block again.
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  • From ANON - Aly on October 17, 2003
    I'm really enjoying this so far. It's an interesting twist having Bootstrap turn Jack, and then Jack turn Bootstrap's son. Can't wait to find out William's reaction to his son having been turned into a bloodsucker like himself, let alone that Jack and Will are lovers. Will Bootstrap accept it or be against it, thinking Jack's corupted his "little boy"? And how will Will take to meeting is father? Plus what kind of relationship, beside a bloodsucking one *hehe*, did William and Jack have? I'm guessing they were also probably lovers, but that's up to you as the writer. I do hope you can find your way to keep writing this soon. I'm very interested in seeing which avenue oft cht choices you take.
    If your still stuck on plot choices, feel free to drop me a line (make sure there's something about aff.net or Crew of the damned in the subject) and I'd be happy to brainstorm with you if it would help at all. I know all to well about the writing traps of trying to get figure out an "ending". Good luck! I hope you can figure out more soon.
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  • From ANON - tankplushie on September 08, 2003
    ::hands you a freeze frame and slomo playback muse recorder, her face solem and her eyes grinning::
    I stole this handy-dandy tool from a few authors... may be cursed by some people for the now 4 year wait on book six, but thought you might need a muse version TVo...^___^ ;-P Lovelovelove this! mwahahaha! it is.... tres awesome!
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  • From ANON - Turner on September 02, 2003


    Well to be truthful I didn't really much like the Idea of our boys being Vampires but I deceided that it wouldn't be fair not to read your story because of it....and well now I'm hooked.... Excellent story so far!!!!!! I have to admit my heart was in my throat at the beginning poor Will dying and Jack having nothing he could do tve hve him (Except that one thing) and then to have to make that chose to save his Will. Oh I just love it please please please update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Aurelius on August 27, 2003
    Awesome story so far! Bootstraps eh? Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Coanteen on August 27, 2003
    I'm liking this a lot.
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  • From ANON - clonesofconfusion on August 27, 2003
    i think i hit a wrong button. ya'know, it's not very nice to tease a girl before she has to go to work, who is it? Bill? Some stranger named William? Comeon, dying over here!! Love it!!! waiting eagerly for more, love yer work, lassie!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mistress Goku on August 15, 2003
    No worries, mate. We all have those bloody inspiration blocks at times. I'm sure you'll come through it well enough. Good to know you have brought some of it else where though. Hope to see you back soon. I really like the story so far and I think you've kept them IC very well. I think your writing style is excellent and am looking forward to seeing more.
    'Til then, 'drink up me harties, yo ho...
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  • From on August 14, 2003
    Good story. I love the vampire angle, as well as Ann Rice's books, even the ones without vampires. Poor Will...I kind of feel sorry for him...stuck with Jack for all eternity.....
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  • From ANON - Earen on August 14, 2003
    I love your lovely explainations and tidbits of hintfulness...
    Now give me something sharp! I want to shave the paper
    stick which was left after I finished the lolli ^_^ *cackles*
    I've always loved the devine thing which is preternatural
    sight. *grins* Lovely! Awesome chappy! Yay! And bwah?!
    Bootsrturneurned Jack? So does that mean then Booty-boy
    is still ... alive, per se? Lovely! *cackles* Why couldn't
    Ana and Gibbs feed off one another like Jack to Bootstrap?
    I'm really really really damned curious about all these
    little tidbits you've left me! *falls over* PLEASE continue
    soon! WAAAAH!

    Earen
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  • From insanepirate513 on August 13, 2003
    This is brilliant, original, wonderful... should I go on? You're a great writer with great ideas, so you need to continue this fic. Immediately.
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  • From ANON - Beth on August 12, 2003
    Okay, okay, I'll write more this time. I'm still quite curious to see how this story goes along. I know you said that you will have some explainations in the next chapter, so I'll waitil iil it comes out and I can read it to ask my most of my questions. But, just one now, did Will already know that Jack and the others were cursed? ::double checks story to make sure she got the line right:: Hopefully there will be some adventure coming soon :-)
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  • From ANON - Alyssa on August 12, 2003
    Great story but I don't think I will be able to read any more. We of the weak stomach are prone to vomiting at the mention of blood being drank. And you have hinted at that. So Sorry. I usually can read vampire fics. But your good with the grapic details. Maybe I'll come back later when I'm not eating and try and read the rest. Anyways great story and don't give up.
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  • From ANON - Rommie on August 12, 2003
    OMG, i so love this completly, as I think i've said.... Although I do hate you.... please fin all your lotr fics...... I know its the wrong film, but please... I can be very irritating when i want to be. grrrr....

    back to pirates.... yes love this, please update soon, and I wont hate you any more.... *wink*
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