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Reviews for Forced By Circumstance

By : Lor
  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2006
    continue please :D
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  • From hellborne on April 16, 2004
    Unfortunately, BOTH Jack and Norrington seemed WAY OOC. Norrington, while being "the protector of justice" and all of that, is not a heartless bastard, as evidenced at the end of the movie ("one day's head start"), and shouldn't be portrayed as someone who would debase even his worst enemy.

    The jail rapes really aught to be commited by an OC or one of Barbossa's crew, as they were the only ones bloodthirsty enough to warrant it. Certainly not Norrington, whose only pitfall is that he's a little colorblind (sees onl bla black and white, and, since Jack is a pirate and pirates are evil, therefore Jack must be evil), and thus ignorant. Ignorance is forgiveable and curable. What you've done here isn't.

    Sorry.

    Hellborne
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  • From ANON - magget on January 16, 2004
    ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER DAMMIT!!!WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!? UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Yersi on January 06, 2004
    That was good,
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  • From ANON - roxie on October 17, 2003
    sequel please! i'm interested in seeing what'll happen next, and how jack will deal w/what's happened.
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  • From ANON - . on September 16, 2003
    Submit the next chapter or face my wrath. Savvy?
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  • From ANON - colie on August 16, 2003
    gah!! that was so wonderful!! i can't wait to see where this goes, and you will be writing more right? geh i hope so!!
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  • From perdowen on August 07, 2003
    Oh wow. That was wonderful.
    Please tell me this will continue?
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  • From ANON - Tab on August 07, 2003
    Lor, you never cease to amaze me! This close to perfection when it comes to a characterization of Jack. I've said it before and I'll say it again ... you are totally channeling him! Your dialogue is wonderfully in keeping with the time period. Bravo! Totally fantastic.

    Tab
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  • From ANON - Daisy Sparrow on August 07, 2003
    Ahhhh~~~~ evivil vil Norrington. Stupid jerk, how dare he hurt Jack. Serve him right for getting gutted.

    Norrington was really vicious, but I guess it was ok for the sake for the plot. Your Jack was really in character though, totally calm and well, Jack-lish in the face of danger and impending death.

    This is a wonderful starts to a series....it is a series right? There is gonna be a next chapter right? It better be ^_^ Can't wait to read it. Will would wanted to comfort Jack, wouldn't he.

    Keep up the good work and please write more.


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