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Reviews for Into the Fire

By : Nimue
  • From ANON - Bria on July 22, 2003
    Great story! I really enj it. it.
    I confess, when I read the sum I w I was expecting somewhat of a Mary Sue, but your story definitely surprised me :)
    Your characterization of Jack was fabulous, and I have to agree with the comment that the song lyrics aren't needed at all.
    Keep up the good work, and I hope you post a sequel!
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  • From ANON - jen on July 22, 2003
    A very nice story! Very tender, very sweet, very in character for Jack, I thought. I noticed a few typos here and there, and I would probably suggest that you leave out the lyrics-- your story doesn't need them. I skipped over them, in fact, because I wanted to read the story itself. But great job, and I'd love to see what you have planned for a sequel.
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  • From Faline on July 22, 2003
    I like this. I'm not so sure I fully endorce the exact lyrics you used for the story since you only really referenced fire once or twice. I do however like your plot and your characters. And the sex was spectacular as well. A sequal would be awesome!
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  • From ANON - phirestar on July 22, 2003
    nice and sweet i enjoyed it. You might however read it over again and check the spelling
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  • From ANON - Inanna on July 22, 2003
    I loved it! I like how you wrote Jack, despite his eccentric nature I would definitely imagine him to be a caring and excellent lover. I can't wait for the sequel. ~happy writing~
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  • From ANON - clonesofconfusion on July 22, 2003
    that was a really sweet tale. tender and touching.
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  • From ANON - Amy B. on July 22, 2003
    I really liked this story- very tender and sexy! jack comes across as extremely appealing. It's good to see some good het action here. I'd enjoy reading a sequel. I'd like to hear more about Tessa and her life at Madame's.
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