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  • From ANON - la lola on December 26, 2006
    are you planing on updating soon? i've been waiting for weeks but you havent! =( so sad!
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  • From ANON - Karna on December 13, 2004
    Being naked and bound was going to be a serious hindrance to effective communication

    hilllllarious!
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  • From ANON - tri on January 18, 2004
    i liked that. the chapter was short but, over all it was good. e-mail me when you get the new chapter up.

    care
    tri
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  • From ANON - Lightwing on August 16, 2003
    So, other people were piqued by that little comment as well, eh? The only part of Jack's personality you seem to be missing is the word 'savvy' being used in every other sentence. My compliments on a well written story.
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  • From ANON - MadoushiClef on July 31, 2003
    Gah! Poor Jack! *huggles her Captain* Don'na worry, Will'll make it all bett



    *glare* Right?

    ~Clef

    (Translation: Write more.)
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  • From ANON - Aryah on July 24, 2003
    I felt you did quite well about Jack's char in the non-con bit, and I belive you're right the screaming and suc pro protest would have been to much, considering who the victim was... keep up the good work and if Jack(*sigh*) shoulf have any emotional trama the loverly Will(again*sigh*) should help him resolve, it wouldn't be to c'leshay.
    Much luv,
    Aryah.
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 23, 2003
    Yay, an update! ^_^ Doesn't matter too much that it's short (though longer would be nice.... ^_-) I liked it. The rumrunner seems evil... great^_^ And I like how you describe Jack. ^_^V

    More updates! I love this story ^^
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  • From ANON - YaoiKaiba on July 23, 2003
    Hi,

    I just want to say with tears in my eyes and a great big hug...thank you for writing a POTC yaoi story. I didn't think anyone would write one...considering some people are evil and don't like gay stories. T.T But they're the best out of het stuff! I would have written my own, but I'm working on an Inuyasha story right now and then I'm going on toward Treasure Planet. Don't ask why I would write yaoi for a kid's show...but James Hawkins is absolutely adorable...including if Silver had a cute son to go with. In either case...*kisses your feet* I'm not worthy! Lol

    ~YaoiKaiba
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  • From ANON - eternal on July 23, 2003
    It was splendid! You did a fine Jack. Saw POTC July 20 and Johnny Depp was great as was Orlando Bloom. I would love to read a Jack/Will fic.
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 20, 2003
    Jack being raped is really delicious.
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  • From ANON - Kortnii on July 19, 2003
    YOU MAKE JACK A SEXY BITCH! NEED MORE RAPE NOW! JACK NEEDS TO BE BUM-FUCKED EVEN MORE! HEHEHEHEHE!!!:D I LOVE YOU!!
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 18, 2003
    Yay, updated ^_^

    Continued ease with presenting Jack's character, and this is a tough situation! Hyou you pulled through it nicely though. My only complaint is the length - I just want to read more of it! ^_-

    Am looking forward to your next update!

    ^_^
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  • From on July 18, 2003
    I love the way you write Jack! I was giggling like mad and I can just see him having a conversation with a tree or deciding that he wouldn't be embarrassed by being...well, bare assed. *cough* Sorry, couldn't resist. Stupid puns.

    Your way of writing Jack's thoughts and dialouge and you you captured his personality, such as how he speaks with his entire body, are absolutely perfect. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Jack just decide he doesn't mind being "used" or will he put up a fight? Though you say it will be Non-Con, I'm thinking he'll just accept it, a year is not an eternity, after all. Maybe he'll enjoy himself eventually and who knows he may get some more rum, too. *g*

    =^.~= Aly


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  • From ANON - Calenharn Elflover on July 18, 2003
    I'd say that you're doing a pretty good job of portraying Jack, thus far. Looking forward to more!

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  • From ANON - Mel on July 18, 2003
    Jack *is* terribly difficult to write, but I think you write him well. Interesting idea, really; wondered how he talked his way onto the ship the saved him... Nice. And, of course, you give us Jack *and* his peep bits. Very nice. ^_-
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