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Reviews for Thine Liver

By : MadameAvery
  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2006
    eurgh. you suckkk..
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  • From ANON - Joe on September 12, 2004
    LMFAO! That was sooo funny! "Can I poke it." jeesus I wass like pisssing my self.
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  • From Nileregwen on January 19, 2004
    Eww...um that was...ewww *cringes*
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  • From ANON - polly on December 01, 2003
    & btw - it was defn the liverspot that made me cringe & NOT jack/will. How dare ppl say it's gross - what they have is potentially beautiful! There's the slight possibility that Will would be to (misguidedly) moralistic to act on his crush on jack, which does exist & is very obvious, for example - when he looks so incredibly flattered that Jack liked his hat. But Jack very definately swings both ways - not to go into stereotypes, but he gestures with his pinkies, he uses any excuse possible to stand as close to will (others too, but it's more exaggerated with will), & did you see him run?!? Waving his hands about everywhere, he's way too flamboyant to be completely straight, & that's not just the rum. & puh-leeze - it is quite easy to be a "ladies man" & have women annoyed enough to slap you without being "ladies only." Jack is without doubt the slashiest disney character ever, & I for one am perfectly happy with that :D & even the quickest glance at the common 'ships explored show that many other ppl also think so. But I am bordering on horrified that there are ppl in the adultfanfic community closeminded enough to balk at the very few jack/will references in this fic, especially when it also contained the aformentioned queasy liverspot imagery.
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  • From ANON - polly on December 01, 2003
    Congrats, I think. That was the first time in a really long time a fic has actually made me cringe. I'm just glad that at least monkeck nck never made an appearence (& no, that is not a plot bunny for next time). That said, relax, it in know way makes me want to kill you. That very long list is far too populated w/ preteens who write self-insertion fics, & anyone has ever written teletubbies slash, to bother about icky liverspot imagery.
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  • From ANON - polly on December 01, 2003
    Congrats, I think. That was the first time in a really long time a fic has actually made me cringe.
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  • From ANON - THE PURPLE SHEEP BLOTTER OF DOOM (doom doom doom...echo echo echo) ^_^ on July 26, 2003
    (Note: Pleese ecuse my poor grmmer/spelling. You see becasue i'm allergic to millkshake pesticide thingiy mabobers and have a habbital (i think i mmade up that word) desease of trying to type at the speed of ligt and make no sence at all (even to myself..ya) I cant tell time! ^_^)

    *is laffing hysteriacly* I LOVE THAT! Onliy a true fan can understatnd and laff at that. And Im one of the top POTC fans ever. FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY! DID I MENTION FUNNEH? The only part i found a little discusting was the part about Jack and Will being tooogether. You see I dont care aboiuot Will being gay. But Jack isn't and hes all mine. So is Johnny Deppp, but not many people know tyat because he and hI hide it so there res no big rumor thinkgy/bad mdedia picture terrifing and sweeping the country faster thatn the speed I try to typoer at. I LOVE THAT! WOOHOOO! This is funny shit. I'm repetative. And only a true fan can laff at stuff when people make fun of it (even if people make fun of shit you
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  • From ANON - Some person who likes pie on July 24, 2003
    "Holy ass!"

    LOL! I gotta remember that one. This was really freakky but really funny!
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  • From ANON - JacksWhore on July 22, 2003
    O_______________O i really cant believe u posted that >.< gross
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 12, 2003
    People pair Jack and Will together because they are emelymely gorgeous and the sex would be hot. This was interesting.
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  • From ANON - Mika Kino on July 10, 2003
    Okay.... I'll help you on your way to hell...er whatever. Don't know why anyone would want your head, there's nothing in that either. What is it with people pairing up Jack and Will? Why must it happen? WHY? Have you no shame? In case those who have watched the movie, yes, Jack was quite the Don Won, anyone who gets slapped by whores is a ladies man, I can promise you that. Why must the women of fanfiction make EVERYTHING slash? ( a teeney exception to you, but I need to get this out.) Any guy, who can wear black eyeshadow 360 degress around his eyes, AND is NOT gay, should be worshipped like a god, providing the guy's as hot as Johnny Depp.


    now that my steam has blown off I enjoyed your sarcastic style of writing, though it deploringly lacks paragraphs. I also recommend not opening the story quite so, for a second there I thought you were some 12 year old writing a fic here, and that was also greatly disturbing.
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