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Reviews for Labyrinth: The next chapter

By : anamazami
  • From ANON - missspacecase on January 31, 2013
    Interesting story but Jareth is too OOC. He seems too modern (use of American slang, for example). He acts like any other guy in this story not like a Goblin King.
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  • From FromAfar on August 24, 2012
    My first impression is: it's just too easy & simple!
    Sarah gets what she wants - and gets away with it.. one wish - and Jareth is at her feet! She regretted rejecting him & leaving the Underground as well as choosing the reality..
    Jareth proposes and Sarah is dying to run away from her family - and reality - to the Underground?..
    And Jareth himself - a typical boyfriend.. a transer student who helps a girl with her homework.. attentive, prptective, gentle if a bit sarcastic and haughty - but too docile and compliant for my liking. Where's the Jareth, the King?..
    As for me, this is a typical fairytale too good to be true. Too straightforward, simplistic and easy.
    Please mind your grammar and spelling - lots of mistakes!

    Good luck with your writing. Hope Sarah wont't regret coming back.

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