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Reviews for Mundali IV

By : laloga13
  • From serendip on May 04, 2013
    So beautiful, just a gorgeously painted picture of the ocean and pure overwhelming love, joy and smexiness. So, so, so good
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  • From serendip on August 12, 2012
    I really love the whole thing, and I really love the ending. Even when you know, still the words are so important and they reaffirm all the love they have between them over and over. It's so lovely to see them in such a deep relationship - and that's really evident throughout the whole thing. I love all the little hints of the bigger story, it gives it depth and in turn, more emotion. I love that they know they can't be together every second bit they still think of each other and they really know how to make the good moments together really meaningful.

    It's so romantic the way Obi and Lys really desire each other. There's this wonderful sense that they are going to make the most out of every second they have and they are just so happy to have found each other - it's just so much fun to read. I love the affection and ardor that is just so clear between them in everything you write. And she is completely swept away by him from start to finish, of course, :D *swoon* When he kisses her and then 'from that moment she was his and only his' - its so perfectly written; I adore that line.

    The descriptions of the entire setting throught are absolutely breathtaking, I can see it clearly and it's all so perfect. I could not have asked for anything better in a beach interlude, so lovely. And it's so smexy that he just has to take her right there. The way he takes care of her is perfect and they are so sexy together. I love this interlude so much, please, please write more!
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