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Reviews for Malastare

By : laloga13
  • From Jade_Max on May 16, 2012
    These two are just like teenagers *grin* having some fun, exploring and getting 'into trouble' but all the while ensuring that they're both enjoying the experience.

    The banter between these two is always so priceless and the set up, the lead in is so well done.

    I agree with NakedClones; the use of the Force in this is so novel. To use it as a tool to enhance their sexual experiences, to mitigate pain and increase their pleasures... it reads as a caring but diverting adventure between two individuals who come together, often randomly, but obviously are willing to take and use the time they're able to eek out to their best advantage.

    Super sexy!
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  • From NakedClones on May 13, 2012
    Just had a chance to read this since we were gone all day for Mother's Day stuff. Wow. Amazing, amazing, story.

    Such a delightful tale of Kali and Ben. Really nice in character for the two of them, as well. I could just hear their voices in my head, particularly Obi Wan's, no, both of them, I'd have to say, because the dialogue was so well written. They both truly were perfectly in character here.

    But, my favorite part had to be using the Force. Don't think I'll ever be able to get THAT image out of my mind. So so funny. Absolutely loved this story.
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  • From serendip on May 13, 2012
    Mmmmm... Malastare :D I love that they're younger here, yet they still know each other so well! The teasing was cute throughout, you can tell they've been on edge for awhile but they obviously trust each other so much. No reason needed! Obi just dives right in :D It's so sexy to have a man just tell you how much he wants you and exactly how too ;-) And Kali's seen holos, huh? Lol. They are so hot together, I do enjoy reading it though their relationship seems perfectly casual at the moment, that seems natural for young knights. I *love* how he seems to know what she needs even when she doesn't quite realize it.

    So good, really! A younger, crazy haired Knight Obi
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