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Reviews for Experiment

By : rabbitwriter
  • From KianaTaversMereel on July 07, 2012
    Seriously, girl, you have GOT to continue this! Whoo! Hot, hot, hot!
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  • From WithPlot on April 18, 2012
    Not being familiar with most of the characters it was a little hard to sort everyone out at first. Still, very hot. I always appreciate your take on clones, not just the smut but the personalities and traits you give them. It feels very authentic.
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  • From ANON - Jadedsnowtiger on April 16, 2012
    Is there a place where I can read your currant story (ies)? I really enjoy your charters, Please update soon I am can't wait to see what's next, or can I wait to See Sheresh, Fives and Boil all go at it, since she is now a little more open to anal..
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  • From ANON - Jadedsnowtiger on April 02, 2012
    Please write more, I will love you forever!
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  • From Jade_Max on April 01, 2012
    Oh my oh my oh my! Talk about -hot-!

    I -love- how open they re all with one another, but Sheresh's POV for this wile caught up in the eddy of sexual tension of want and desires is just inspired. I love how everything contributes to her enjoyment and her frustration with Korbin is pretty palpable when he can't seem to understand what she wants. Once he gets it though... ;)

    Damn! awesome tension, awesome execution... and the ending was great!

    Women are complicated - LOL! I bet; Sometimes it's better to stick with what you know *grin* but in this case I think they're all better for the experience *grin*

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  • From ANON - Diana on March 31, 2012
    A delightful way to spend some time with our favorite characters.

    Noticed one little typo:
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    Boil was hard; like my husband, I was instantly fascinated by the swollen erection that stood proud against the cool Alderaanian night air. The scent of precum already hung thick in the air and Echo's pheromones were off the chart – half-Zeltron that I was, I could practically taste them.

    Did you mean "Boil" there instead of Echo?

    Too bad Echo wasn't there, huh?
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