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Reviews for Tatooine I

By : laloga13
  • From serendip on August 11, 2012
    Nothing better; sleepy, tired and exhausted and in need of comfort so I pull out small luxuries and this again and they are so, so good. Lovely and sweet, with a slow burning fire stoking deep down. I just love how ready, willing and able Obi is and Keren is just perfect. I think he knows that she'll let him know when she's really ready and she does. On the counter no less. These two have yet to officially make it to a bed. I think I've read this three times since last night :) One of your very best. More? Please? :-) Really, just so good and fun to read.
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  • From serendip on May 26, 2012
    Sigh... yes, reading again because I love this so much. It's brimming over with romance and emotion and it's just so darn sexy. Keren is perfect for Obi :) Even despite a bit of hesitation at first to initiate the next step, when she finally decides it's what she wants she has no hesitation in showing him exactly what she wants. On the counter. I love seeing the way he affects her so greatly - it's so well written. And I'm sure in her sweet, but lightly spicy way she affects him as well, but I'd sure love to hear it from him ;-) I needed a smile and this always provides.
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  • From serendip on March 10, 2012
    I love this cozy, comfy little place they're in both literally and emotionally, but of course there's always something a little bit better ;) like Obi-Wan naked. I love all the little details you include like the particular blue of his eyes and the smell of linen and tea that is Ben, all together paints such a nice complete picture. Love this:

    **“You may as well spend the night here,” she added in a casual voice.

    Unexpectedly, he flashed her a broad smile that made her cheeks grow warm. “I suppose I can manage that.”**

    Of course it has happened all too innocently before, but there's an undercurrent of tension in both of their lines that suggests this time might be different, they've waited long enough.

    **As it happened, that first night she'd finally resolved the issue on her own, but she imagined that it was far less satisfying than it would have been if Ben had taken a participatory role**

    And this was when I knew I loved Keren! Lol :-) I wonder if he could sense anything going on in that room... ;-) I see a story there...

    I love that she just cannot resist him any longer, because she's been thinking about using that counter top since the moment he walked in to her shop and I love that he knows this, somehow ♥

    **Nothing in her past experiences could have prepared her for the sensation**

    And apparently he has *very special* magical powers :-D Whew! Lucky girl indeed. And he's still ready for more. Love.

    Such a sweet and spicy little one shot. I love the simpleness of them together at this point in their lives, and there's something undeniably romantic about being stuck inside together because of a storm, and I love the little spark of mischief they each bring to their romance. Nothing wrong with enjoying yourself out there in the peace of the desert. Please, please write more :-D Just love ♥♥♥




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