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Reviews for Awakening

By : laloga13
  • From ANON - Jade_Max on February 19, 2012
    Muahahah! This was fantastic.

    Kali taken over by a sex starved spirit and Stone having to 'help'? *evil grin* Adored it!

    I like how her apprentice is the one who notes just how strong he cares for her before Kali seems to realize it. Stonewall stepping in to help her and Kali feeling like she was taking advantage of him was true to character for both of them as you've established them to be.

    He'd do anything for her - literally - and Kali hasn't realized that yet; though, by the end of this, I think she has. Stone being bewildered by the fact Ben is Obi-Wan was priceless; he finally realizes what he's got only now he's 'in competition with' a Jedi? Wow, if he didn't have issues with self esteem before...

    Talk about a knock to the ego. Or maybe an ego boost since he compares? Kali did, after all, call herself a lucky girl *grin*

    Am I bias in saying I like Kali with Stone better than Kali with Obi-Wan? They're just so smoking -hot- together! *fans self* You did a fantastic job keeping their sex scenes adventurous, detailed and

    An excellent fic; Porn with plot - I love it!
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