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By : laloga13
  • From ANON - Jade_Max on February 19, 2012
    Best mission ever indeed!

    That last lines certainly sums it up.

    I adore how you handled their first time together with Kali taking the lead and -showing- him what pleased her all the while teaching him about his own body and what she wanted..and what he wanted.

    The dynamic between them is so special; very involved and you can totally tell he's a lost cause. They'll never be anyone but Kali for him. If ever there was, she'd always hold a special place in his heart because of these days.

    I love that she's pushing him to be more than he can be, to be more than just a soldier, but I think the lovemaking lessons aren't so much about teaching for her. She might be a Jedi, but she's certainly very... er... attached to her Captain ;)

    Nicely done!
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