Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Moonage Daydream

By : beetsunnybottom
  • From kharkcom on October 15, 2011
    I adore this story. I think it's exceptionally well written and can't wait to see where its going. Please keep up the good work!
    Report Review

  • From hawthorne on October 14, 2011
    what happened to the cat?

    why is Sarah living in England? and not the USA as in the movie? why did you kill off her mother at childbirth? when she was definitely alive when Sarah was 15... why kill off her father and stepmother? why write a fan fic if you cant stay with canon fundamental principals of character plot history and setting and than develop forward from that source? if this is a rewrite you should go back and try again.. the first chapter like a author's point form of ideas that should be introduced BEFORE they are organized into a story... why tell us she hasnt seen Jareth in 10 years... show us! you keep contradicting your character statements,.... she hasnt thought of him... she's forgotten him yet here she is thinking of him BEFORE she see him on her doorstep... it would of be more interesting if that had been the first intro of Jareth back into her life... not her rambling disorganized thoughts... mixed with the failed fiancé relationship...

    btw why a cat? this could be fun IF you had Jareth interacting with said cat... but Sarah is a dog person... Merlin Sir Didymus Ambrosius... are all proof of that...
    Report Review

  • From Hiiroshoken on October 13, 2011
    This is a very well written story, very well researched and thought out. I enjoy the mature tone it takes because it contrasts so much from the young child that Sarah used to be. I am very curious to see how the Goblin King is going to cope in the mortal world and how long it will be before Sarah throttles him. xD Well done, love! I am excited to read more.
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!