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Reviews for Till the End of the World

By : AndroidBarbie19
  • From kin995544 on December 06, 2011
    i like so far.
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on December 03, 2011
    0_0 Damn, girl did that on purpose....she a true G
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  • From GrayHuntress on November 08, 2011
    Very enjoyable chapter. Don't find many voyeur Yautja!
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  • From shadowblade65 on November 08, 2011
    excellent story hope you keep going really like this story keep up the good work
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  • From GrayHuntress on October 15, 2011
    I like your story very much and look forward to reading more of it. The details are nicely written and I like the interaction between your characters.
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  • From kin995544 on September 26, 2011
    OK you got my attention. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - silver_wing on September 17, 2011
    And the plot thickens!!! To think he's intriguEd by his adopted sister!! Thanks for making the paragraph shorter. :) These old eyes aren't getting any younger!! I migh not be faithfully reviewing your story for the next 2 months or so but I hope that you won't get discouraged and stop writing. I hope to see where this plot will lead to! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Silverkitsune26 on September 11, 2011
    Werry interesting and well written. Hope you will update soon. ^_^
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  • From CLTexas84 on September 05, 2011
    Really enjoying this story so far! Nicely done!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on September 05, 2011
    Hey, that was a really good start!
    I cannot wait for his response, she's his sister! muhahahahaha!
    hope to read more!
    good luck
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  • From ANON - Silver_Wing on September 05, 2011
    It's a good start to your story. I'd like to see how it progresses.

    On a side note, the paragraphs are kind of long. To me, they blur together. There is nothing wrong with the content but perhaps making smaller paragraphs out of the longer ones would help these old eyes. :)
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  • From GrayHuntress on September 02, 2011
    A lovely start. I am hoping you throw something unpredictable into the mix.
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