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Reviews for Within Dreams - COMPLETE

By : jinx1764
  • From HisBadWolf on June 29, 2016
    An amazing story!  I've just spend an entire evening reading the whole thing from start to finish.  Thank you!
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  • From ANON - LwoD on February 08, 2016
    Amazing talent you've got here. Very entertaining. 🌠
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  • From ANON - Nonnix on February 01, 2016
    I can believe that GS is death I almost cry in that chapter and I can't stop reading it. I love the story
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  • From ANON - Blue on January 27, 2016
    Love the story, but the amount of "bloody hell" and "bloody this and that" is making it hard to stay focused. Gerard says it multiple times in every chapter. It is maddening. But like I said, I like the spey and the rest of the story is well written. Just trying to hard to be British and in doing so made Gerard annoying.
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  • From wizardswoman on November 13, 2015
    Wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it.
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  • From cynfulme on June 15, 2014
    SEQUEL! So many threads you could use to continue on with this story...follow up with Cassie, Toby, Todd's girls, even Jacen!
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  • From LadyHemlock27 on June 10, 2013
    oh this was such a wonderful story. I'm very fond of it. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us
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  • From Jetredgirl on August 26, 2012
    I love your story, it's so beautiful, got so absorbed read it all in 3 hours. Blessings!
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  • From ANON - amanda on April 30, 2012
    Well written. One of the best stories I've read in a while... Except I didn't understanfd why chapter thirty was only an authors note. I was saddened to go from them discovering each other (as finally mutuallly in love) and him finding out he's a father to every body in the underground... I was slightly confused...
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  • From ANON - amanda on April 27, 2012
    I would just like to say that I only just finished chapter 15 and so far I'm loving it. I used to watch this movie all the time and now to read an excellent fanfic. *muah* I love ya. Lol any whoo... In chapter 15 when they are talking about her mother and when she finally matures a little you meant to say fifteenth. But in the story it says fiftieth. That's one of the first typos I've noticed. :) now on with the rest of the story. Oh and might I say you are excellent at writing hot passionate sex scenes.
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  • From janeitesarah on January 31, 2012
    I love this chapter- I can't count how many times I've reread it since it was posted! I look forward to seeing how you end this!
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  • From janeitesarah on January 23, 2012
    Cruel, cruel author!! Why did you leave it there??? I do hope you are posting again BEFORE the end of the week?? Like tomorrow?? Please????
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  • From ANON - Queen of the Weasels on January 21, 2012
    Ah, I'm hooked. Great story, so great that I just spent 5 hours reading it. Seriously, It's past 3 in the morning. I should go to bed. :( But anyway, amazingly awesome fantastic work! Can't wait for an update.
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  • From janeitesarah on January 18, 2012
    While I am happy to know that Jareth is the father (I couldn't figure out if you were evil enough to torture him that way...) I still think this chapter ended on a terrible cliffie- what is Sarah going to do now??? PLEASE tell me you are posting again tomorrow!! Please?? Pretty please?? Do you take sugar with your 'please'? I am not above bribes!
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  • From kdarkbutterfly on January 11, 2012
    Please for the love of all the Gods (except for Zeus, no love cookie for you!) PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! Do Not Let This One Go Until The End Or You Will Face Unspeakable Pain! (though really no way of actually going through with this threat, but I still stand by it lol) I LOVE this story, I love how you twisted it into such a journey for the both of them into realizing their true feelings for each other. I really want to read more and to see how this great romance story about true love ends.
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