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By : tartausucre
  • From ANON - Laura on December 09, 2012
    Great chapters! More soon!
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  • From ANON - Laura on September 11, 2012
    It’s been awhile since I’ve checked on this story for new chapter updates, but I’m glad I did today! You have added many outstanding chapters that enhance the story so much. I’m very glad that you didn’t make the sex act just another common brutal rape scene, (even though Margaux was unwilling…) you gave Margaux her own pleasure as well, making the scene that much more enjoyable and passionate. Rape/sex scenes can be very difficult to write, but you seem to script them very well, and effortlessly. Great Job! More soon?
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  • From ANON - Marcus M. on April 06, 2012
    Excellent story. I actually saw Firewall last night on TV. I can see some similarities between the movie and your story but at the same time you made it your own.

    Bye the way, I don't think you need to rewrite anything. It's great the way it is.
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  • From ANON - Laura on December 29, 2011
    Wow, I was not expecting that! Thank you so very much for creating your own version of the Bill character, one that actually has some compassion. (which I would have love to see in the movie!) You are just continuously impressing me with every update you post. =]

    Update! Update! Update!
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  • From ANON - Laura on December 18, 2011
    Excellent update! The wait was so worth it.

    I absolutely love it that you have made Bills character start to have (as it seems) romantic feelings towards Margaux, and that’s why he gets aggravated when she moves away from him. Again, you are an amazing writer. I’m in love with the plot of this story so far. I haven’t read a lot of very well written “hostage” stories on line. Aside from your, of course =)

    Keep the wonderful updates coming!
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  • From ANON - Laura on November 21, 2011
    Fantastic updates! Robert and Bill have an exceedingly odd relationship, and it seems Margaux likes it when psychopaths lick blood from her fingertips. =P

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Laura on November 08, 2011
    Once again you have left me wanting more! I’m getting some Stockholm Syndrome vibes from Margaux’s character. More towards Bill then Robert, of course.

    More as soon as you can! =)
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  • From lost1 on October 31, 2011
    You do this every time....I get addicted and there's nothing left to read!
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 26, 2011
    Marvellous! You have such a talent for capturing every characters emotions perfectly.

    I really thought that Bill was changing for the better, but when he whipped Margaux with his belt it proves that he is still a crazy mother fucker! lol
    And Robert seems very unpredictable, like he might rape Margaux at any moment or even turn on Bill!

    I need more updates. Now. This story is just to addictive for you to make me wait even one day for an update! =)
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  • From lost1 on October 25, 2011
    Once again, marvelously done. And I'm wanting more! I shall check back anxiously for updates!
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 17, 2011
    Wow. Your story is incredible! You’ve captured Bill’s persona exactly as it is in the movie (which was amazing and is by far my favourite Paul Bettany performance). The way you have written it makes you want to just keep reading and reading. And I love it how you haven’t given anything away about a possible love connect or not. Please update soon. =]
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  • From ANON - Elendil on October 09, 2011
    Wow, I am totally enthralled by this story! I have to know what happens next! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!
    And I promise I will give you a more productive critique once I read the whole thing; I give better comments on a whole piece basis.

    Also, I didn't see the revised version. Where would I find it?
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  • From Ennya on June 22, 2011
    These last two chapters were so great; I absolutely love how you've written Bill in how he can be so utterly charming one moment and the next be a total prick. It was also really great to see that you had updated by two chapters so there was lots to read. :) Really looking forward to what happens next, keep up the good work!
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  • From Ennya on June 19, 2011
    Omg thank you thank you THANK YOU! I have been looking for a well-written Bill-centered story FOREVER and I just found your story and I loved every single moment of it! Your writing flows so well and you have Bill so perfectly in character. Please continue soon, I'm dying to read more!
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