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Reviews for "Poppies! Poppies!"

By : JayDee
  • From ANON - Poppies! Poppies! on June 11, 2022

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  • From NecroNOMNOMicon on May 14, 2015
    I must confess that this story really made me laugh. From calling Scarecrow at straw-filled buffoon to...er, activating his artificial appendage, I was smiling all the way through. One wonders what the creator of the Tin Man had in mind when he was created. Perhaps it was a mechanically inclined lady who built him? In the land of Oz, that almost seems likely. (The damn Flying Monkeys still terrify me, though -- I could have lived a long and healthy life without reading that part) I think it would be be worth another chapter just to see Dorothy waking up and look down and her bulging panties and think, "WTF?" Then Tin Man points at the Lion and shrugs his shoulders.
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  • From ANON - Cal on February 22, 2011
    Could there be a sequel? Maybe the rest of the group are just as twisted as Tin Man? Or the Wizard has a "special request" for Dorothy before he helps her?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2011
    Oh, this was brilliant! A nice twist on heartlessness, and a wonderful use of the prompt! :D
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  • From ApolloImperium on February 12, 2011
    I was wondering when I'd see a Wizard of Oz story and I admit that when I saw it was you, I knew I was in for an interesting ride. I always knew there was something off about the tin man ;)
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  • From FairySlayer on February 09, 2011
    Well, because of the initial curse the Tin Man did have every part of his body replaced. That's a great new take on the classic, and it's great that the witch realized the value of having such a cruel, deceptive, and greedy person playing for her team.

    The description of the rape scene itself was good, right down to him clutching the ground as he worked her insides over so cruelly. He must have been good if even the wicked witch could get to turned on by "robot on girl porn." Also, you did a good job of describing his clothes and then how he moved and removed parts for access. Was there a little tell in there with him covering her face, or was it just to keep her from seeing what he was doing if she happened to wake up and he needed to jump back? I also wonder if having poppies stuffed inside of her could leech some of the chemicals into her system and keep her a bit dizzy for a while.

    Though I am surprise his shaft wasn't "riveted for her pleasure"? He only cares about his own though, and the witch's offer is probably going to win him over. Too bad about what's going to happen to the others.

    Maybe the flying monkeys will end up using her little dog Toto too.

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  • From pittwitch on February 08, 2011
    Evil! Evil TinMan! Awesome stuff! I have to admit the first image I had when I saw the prompt was the poppy field, and dear Dorothy Gayle fast asleep. This wicked witch loves that you included The Wicked Witch. Great stuff, JayDee. Thanks for sharing, PW
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  • From bloodravyn on February 08, 2011
    that was awesome!
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