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Reviews for Dusk

By : Bethster7
  • From ANON - Rebekah on October 21, 2015
    Brilliant! I'm looking foward to more chapters, I love the version of how barbossa lost his leg. Please continue

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  • From ANON - sugarxpeach on August 30, 2013
    This story is really amazing! Please please PLEASE continue writing it! The only thing I dislike about fanfiction is how it's always the really good stories that go unfinished. All the while all us fans wait with bated breath hoping to see what happens. Please don't forget this lovely story!
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  • From ANON - Kerowyn on August 24, 2011
    You probably haven't updated this in a while and have moved on, but I would like to say that this is a fantastic plot line and I do hope you continue it :)
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  • From lfuller711 on June 26, 2011
    I really appreciate your writing. Thanks for this new slant on why/how Barbossa lost his leg and for how you included Elizabeth in the story. I hope you write more!
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  • From BethanyEllen on June 13, 2011
    I hope you won't wait too long before you update again.
    I like when this story is taking place, very enjoyable so far.
    Can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on November 15, 2010
    I love Barbossabeth, so thank you so much for writing!

    I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From MissBarbs on November 12, 2010
    Wonderful story und such a great pleasure to read. I’m enjoying the slow growing of that relationship. You perfectly catched Barbossa´s and Elizabeth´s character. I hardly notice time pass as I read it. Can't wait to see what happens next ! Thank you so much for that story !
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  • From MissBarbs on November 05, 2010
    I love your story as well...gripping and emotional, exellent and fluently written !
    I´m curious how the story developes further...please update soon !

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  • From ANON - bonnyblondelass on November 04, 2010
    And so the situation begins to heat up! :) You continue to hold me in rapt attention here. BTW, in order to get italics, you type < and then the letter 'i', and then an ending like this > at the beginning of the letter. When you want to end it, type < and then /i and then >. If you want more info or even a beta, email me! I am loving your tale, and am envious that you seem better able to keep it flowing smoothly than I am with my current story.

    Contact bonnyblonde (at) gmail.com.
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  • From bonnyblonde on October 26, 2010
    What a wonderful chapter! I am SO loving this story. "A dismal sadness"...very poetic, very appropos of Barbossa himself, don't you think? This story is so compelling and so well written, truly beautiful. I can hardly wait for this relationship to bloom, you have crafted a story that has drawn me into that world and leaves me wanting more. :)

    BBL
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  • From on October 19, 2010
    Barbossa makes such a great captain. I hope that you continue.
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  • From MissBarbs on October 16, 2010
    Indeed a dramatic and violent description how Hector could have lost his leg. Very good written and all actors are in character. Because i´m an Elizabeth / Barbossa fanatic, i hope to read more about that relationship, please update soon !
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  • From bonnyblonde on October 14, 2010
    Wow! What a fantastic start! You've captured Barbossa beautifully. :) Your descriptions of the mermaid, of the surroundings, of Hector's terribly injury, are all evocative enough that I can see it all in mind's eye. Love it to bits, sure hope to read more soon.

    BBL
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