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Reviews for The Immortal Heart

By : amandalee
  • From CondemnedForLife on December 27, 2010
    Yeah! You updated! I'm so, so happy!! I looked at this a few minutes ago, saw that there were two new chapters, giggled very childishly then happily read on! Two very great chapters by the way, they are finally at Crete, Demeter is healed and now I just hope Hera gets whats coming to her! :) Update soon!
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  • From ANON - CondemnedForLife on December 20, 2010
    I have to say that this story is absolutely incredible! I only found it yesterday and had to read it from start to finish without stopping because I was so entralled! Your writing is amazing and literally flows off the pages. I read your other story as well and although I loved it, I cried for Hades at the end. I was so upset that after eerything he had been through he still didn't get any luck.
    I really hope that the ending in The Immortal Heart is happier for Hades because he really deserves it. Two things I'm curious about however is 1: Was it Hera's poisoning of Hades that made the baby so disformed or was he like that already and 2: Would Hades still not have the womb inside him? I mean what would have happened to it after the birth, did it disappear or something? If it didn't it would be incredible if he could get pregnant again for Zeus.
    I can't wait to see how Hades' powers develop and if Demeter will live. . . Update soon please!!
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  • From butterflies1974 on November 28, 2010
    Hades finally healing!!!! And I loved how Hera got laughed at by Zeus that was quite funny. I can't wait for Hera to slip up and accidently give away her jealousy and her hateful nature.
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  • From butterflies1974 on November 23, 2010
    Wow...this chapter was really captivating! Zeus...well what can you say? He finally got his head out of his butt and helped Hades. Really I am not surprised that Hades tried to kill himself, the way you wrote his depression was so very real and heart breaking. And I love how Poisiden saved him that was truly brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - jaino on November 23, 2010
    This story is so addicting. Thank you for updating so often... the suspense at the end of each chapter almost kills me, lol. I'm sad that the baby ended up that way but it's a good twist in the plot. I'm really happy this chapter ended on a nice note, can't wait for more!
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  • From butterflies1974 on November 21, 2010
    So sad and I really hope that Hera gets found out...and I love how you have developed a story which makes Zeus the right amount of jerk where you get irritated with him but the right amount of loveable where you can't help but like him.
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  • From ANON - Chiaki D. on November 20, 2010
    TT_____________TT Oh, it hurts so good. So the Kraken is born... But darn it! Shall Hera remain unpunished for her crimes?! And poor Hades. Has Zeus abandoned him so quickly? I understand the reasoning, and I'm holding on to hope but egads. The angst! Great update! Can't wait to find out if this will evolve into canon or not.... *Hopes for the not* XD Hahahahah.
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  • From butterflies1974 on November 18, 2010
    Here I am sitting in my computer chair crying like a baby...poor Hades. But I do see where you are going with this chapter for the child had to end up in the sea (if I remember my legend correctly). But again I say poor Hades... :(
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  • From butterflies1974 on November 16, 2010
    Very cool! The drawing were very nicely done and make prefect sense with this chapter. I am so glad that he didn't lose his baby....
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  • From xStickyxRicex on November 16, 2010
    First and foremost I would like to thank you for updating quickly. I love that, its like pretty much every day I check and I'm happy because The Immortal Heart has been updated! With this new chapter though I was a little disappointed. I just don't understand why you referred to Hades as the "mother." Hades is a man, clearly, so he is a father. If you wanted him to be a mother why didn't you just keep him a woman? It's kind of offensive because I am transgendered and at first what happened to Hades was really relateable and that was fine. But with the very real possibility of me becoming a pregnant male it's important to me to be recognized as a father. I seriously think you and other writes of this genre should reconsider word choice. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Chiaki D. on November 15, 2010
    TT___TT Such a cliffie! And with that ending line! I'm running myself sparse thinking of all the possibilities for next chapter! Oh the angst! XD So good though!!
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  • From butterflies1974 on November 14, 2010
    Yeh! He said it...three little words...Zeus does have a heart. I hope that the child survives Hera 'intervention'. But with Hades being a strong god in his own right, I hope he is the one to take down Hera but then seeing Zeus go all 'ancient greek' god on her a$$ wou8ld be interesting also. Thank you for the chapter it was brilliant and I look forward to more.
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  • From Arai565 on November 10, 2010
    Oh my, ZeusHades. My secret OTP :D
    Really loving this story so far, and you definitely deserve more reviews.
    I personally hope that his baby isn't the kraken this time.
    I just want them to have their happily-ever-after with a bit of drama/angst to making the ending more meaningful.

    Can't wait for more,
    SSS
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  • From ANON - Chiaki D. on November 07, 2010
    ............ BABYYYYYyyyy! YESSSS....
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  • From ANON - Chiaki D. on November 06, 2010
    Dear Author... I am MORE than okay with that! Heh! And thanks for the update again! Great way to start the weekend after a very long week.... Such progress between the two, it's almost unbearable.
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