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By : BlueBastard
  • From AliVega1 on January 21, 2014
    kudos to being first story I review since joining this site. I am so hoping for a third chapter.
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  • From ANON - tuck on July 29, 2013
    I'm so hooked! What happens? Is this on any other site? will both spocks fight over kirk? Also do you know any stories with just kirk and prime spock get together or or with kirk going back intime to save old planet vulcan? thanks for creating this one of akind story its just... WOW!
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  • From ANON - Crazy Irish Lass on June 21, 2013
    Please please please finish this story! I was quite upset to learn this hadn't been updated since 2010. You have a good plot idea, and you should develop it more. This site needs more jems like this. I love how you are taking the fact Spock Prime already had a relationship and is missing Jim in his time line, (who is long dead by that point). Seeing Jim in this time line must have felt like a second chance or rerunion to him. I can see Spock Prime flat out saying to Spock "if you don't pursue him, I will."
    Anyways, I'm off topic. You have a good plausible plot line going here, and you should develop it. You could even bring Into Darkness in and develop the story with that. Good luck, hope to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - Natasha on May 09, 2013
    I wish you would finish this story!
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  • From ANON - TicTac on April 26, 2013
    Please update this soon!
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  • From T_Mar1959 on October 19, 2012
    Please come back and finish up the story. I just can not wait to see what is going to happen when Prime opens the door to Spock and then sees Jim there. I can just see a fight for Jim is about to take place. I just hope that what ever you have in mind you will come back and finish up the story it is just too good to leave it unfinished.
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  • From ANON - Shelly on November 24, 2010
    Hey :)

    Nice story! I like it very much! The second chapter has a mean ending! XD I hope the third one will come veeeeeeeery soon! I want to know how young Spock is going to react if he sees his Captain with Spock Prime. ;)

    Shelly
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  • From ANON - illusory on November 15, 2010
    This is really good. Totally like all the tension flying around, and the interaction between Spock Prime and Jim is delicious.

    That said, it was jarring to have Jim call him Spock Prime out loud. Jim (or others) mentally referring to him as 'Spock Prime' is understandable or even in conversation when referring to both Spocks in order to make a distinction. To actually call Spock that when they're alone though, it felt awkward and impersonal. And I'm guessing that was Spock calling his counterpart that at the end. Why would Spock need to make the distinction? After he wouldn't get confused about who he's referring to.

    A thought, I was just so caught up in the story that when Jim called him that it kind of through me and then I couldn't stop thinking about it as I was reading the rest of the chapter. Your story is very good though, I kind of think that's why I couldn't help but bring this up. Awesome work though and I look forward to seeing where things go from here.
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  • From ANON - zephyr on August 09, 2010
    omg you are so evil! you HAVE to continue this it's an awesome story!!! please continue soon!!
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  • From FairyNiamh on July 17, 2010
    *pokes at you* You're still there right? Your going to put up another chapter soon I hope. Really enjoying the story so far and would love to see the rest of this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2010
    so where's the rest?
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  • From ANON - Jen on June 22, 2010
    I just wanted to let you know that i really like this story and i hope that you will continue to write it and that I cant wait till the next chapter
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  • From ANON - industrialmidnight on June 06, 2010
    I have to say...I really like this one. Please continue as soon as your fingers possibly can!
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  • From OptimalHarry on May 27, 2010
    Continue! I love this story!
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  • From Katonie on May 20, 2010
    I want to see where this goes! Please update again soon :D

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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